Not sure if its my browser or Itch but when I try running the game I get a warning about being unable to load scene “save1” despite having cleared all site data relating to Itch (I’m using Zen browser).
Also I’d suggest playtesting as a female MC so you can spot all the places you’ve hardcoded for male MC because there are many in the new demo on cogdemos.
Thanks for bringing this to itch.io - cogdemos is great but for me the save system is useless - takes me back to the very start of the game every time an author updates.
I would suggest though that as you get closer to release that you get a person with a stronger grasp of English (any variant) to give you an edit pass or two - especially if you plan to sell the game via hosted games.
