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Thanks for the update. I actually like the current writing and dynamic of the MC and Petal, with Petal pushing the MC to do more. If you change the writing to much it may seem that the MC is pushing Petal to do more, changing the dynamic. But who knows, you're an excellent writer and in the end I know you'll get it jest right. Also I like the Bliss model and thanks for the great VN, keep up the good work.