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A very long and complex game. The way the growth and storytelling are presented is not interesting and slow, stretched out over many hours. The meaning of fetish eroticism is lost. This could be forgiven if the game was not dedicated to a fetish. But when the main goal is to excite the fetish interests of the players, and we are offered 10 hours to kill goblins, run around in search of something incomprehensible and solve riddles, and in return see small and insignificant changes ... this is a severe deception of expectations. Moreover, it is not worth the money. The only thing I can praise here is the large number of arts on the topic of sizes. Otherwise, I do not recommend people to waste time on this in the hope of seeing incredible content on the fetish of giantess. It's a pity.

A very interesting project. Have you ever read the visual novel "Saya No Uta"? There, the main character sees the world in a similar way.

I thought about the plot of your game. The first thought that I had for me was that the girl at the beginning of the game infected the protagonist and the following days is the sensations of a sick person during high temperature. White people are microbes (perhaps covid?). The main character fights the disease. But what symbolizes the pit? The hero tries to dig a tunnel to escape from the disease? Or does he want to bury himself from the outside world? Maybe the allusion is not on the disease, but rather on the fear (or hatred) of society and how such a person sees the world. Perhaps white people are guys from the party? Satire for rotten society and noisy companies. Perhaps I dig too deep in search of meaning, but it is very interesting to know what the author put in the plot when creating. But probably this is a secret.

Thank you sir! This is exactly what I was looking for these last days. I like your projects.

This is only my subjective opinion, but I think this fetish novel would have turned out more magnificent if:

1) Pay more attention to scenes of general growth (height) of the heroine. There are more comments about what are all small for her in comparison with how it was at the beginning of the month. To make more scenes where the heroine rests on the ceiling and talks about how little space is for her.

2) Add another scene where the heroine (Futanari) fill balls for even greater growth. The heroine notes how it becomes more difficult for her from pressure, but she becomes more pleased with this severity. That is, this is already in the short story, but I mean that it would be great to see another scene to see the heroine on the verge of overflow.

3) Perhaps, becoming especially huge, the heroine did not have enough comments on his girlfriend about the difference in size. Something in the spirit of "I was so low for you, but now look at us now. What do you feel when we have changed your roles in size?" Not necessarily something evil and dominant. She can even joke.

However, perhaps this will violate the general nature of the heroine that you wanted to create.

Of course, all these points of excess and a matter of taste. I just wrote about what was not enough specifically in my opinion.

In any case, I did not think that you would publish a new short story after Bloom War. You pleasantly surprised us. Thanks from the community of our fetish. Good luck in your work!