Hey! I saw there was an update and I checked it out some more.
I can't believe how much I left on the table the first time through lol, our other commenter saying there were 6 scenes got me looking around. And I found some that weren't really mentioned as in observer scenes. I still have to look through more of this game to find everything, I felt like I was being thorough at first but I've realized I wasn't at all now.
I want to be clear, I love what you're doing here!
Minor gripe though. I've seen it mentioned before, but I don't see a solution. If there isn't a solution yet, that's fine too - I know this is an early build.
When things are on the right side of the screen, I can't read the text that pops up. Half of the text box is off screen. So for instance, inspirations or pred skills. For inspirations usually I'll just use them to learn what they are and then undo my turn, although unfortunately that did lose me an endless run where I never saved. I wanted to put high stakes on myself, then I found (after popping inspirations) not only could I not reset my turn, I also couldn't end my turn. That was a bummer when I was at the last fight before the boss.
The pred skills are more important to be able to read though, you don't get many of them after all. I can't see either.
That's a minor issue though, I'm sure it'll get worked out. I'm still really excited to see where this story is going! Especially having explored so many more ways it can start! Like I started out thinking mc would be pred or prey basically, and those are there, but also I can see now mc being or having a doll, or just many other ways the characters all interact. If you keep the same quality of storytelling this game is going to be amazing when it is finished!