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No Problem. Also if you wanna make a future game i could try and translate everything in german because im from german. 

Heya! I'ts me, Mayday or TheForestVN on Twitter. 

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Ngl when i first opened up the game i thought that there will be no menu music. I know it sounds wrong to think that but i just had a feeling that theres no menu music. When  i started the game i really liked it that you get instantly thrown into the Story. I also really liked that you knew from the beginning who the Main character is in "The Blue Cloth". He is well drawn and you can read his expressions good. (Same goes for every other Character) I also like it that you put a human into the story. Not many vn's have this. 

The Story is well written and i didn't notice a single misspelling. (In my 15 Mins of playtime) You also didnt use the whole time words that were difficult to read. The story was easy to read.

The Backgrounds were also really well drawn. There were no big details. I really liked that, because you can let your mind free thinking what could be there. (Hope you get what i mean)

I also really liked the music. I don't know if you made the music by yourself or got it from the internet but it was well choosen/made. It did fit in perfectly. 

I will give this vn a 90/100.

Its just a 90 because from what i read it's a really short story. I also skipped everything at first by using the skip button and it didnt take long to get to the end.

Everything else was perfect. Ngl i think you would be amazing at making a really long Furry VN. I can also imagine that you could create a really good horror or romance VN. 

You really need to make a longer VN. 

Welp thats everything for now. MayDay is out! 

See ya!

Btw its 2.36am for me...