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Hello, I wanna start by saying the premise and story so far are very interesting. The writing is also very immersive and impressive! Overall, amazing job. I also really enjoy the characters. Personally, the only gripe I have is revolving how the MC runs away. I think you already mentioned possibly adding an option to not have that happen. I just feel like I wouldn't run away from a group of people trying to protect me with no memories plus almost being killed. I would understand if the mc was threatened to some degree, but based of the information given it doesn't present that way. Just a small critique though, otherwise I'm excited to see where this will go!

I think what the original commentor was attempting to say is that an otome is classified as a game targeted towards woman with a female mc. Typically, anything other would be classified as an otoge or amare game. I don't think it matters that the otome tag is listed on this game as there is the option for a fem mc. However, they are right, if there was no fem mc it would not be an otome game. I do think many in the fandom are a bit fed up with the term being used as an umbrella for romance games because that's not what an otome game is. In my personal opinion though this game can use to otome game tag though. 

Oh wow, this otoge is already sooo good. Honestly, the writing is so detailed and satisfies a certain itch I've craved for awhile in terms of style. I can not wait to see what it becomes!