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Our small team is looking for a coder ,  we are looking for someone who know how to work with Twine, but if you can work with other engine, we can accommodate

Tất nhiên ^^ cảm ơn bn đã ghé chơi

chùi ui, bạn không biết bọn tui vui xỉu khi thấy lại Bánh đâu huhu <3 Thank you vì đã dành thời gian và chơi qua prototype nho nhỏ này nha >< hóng được thấy thêm nhận xét của Bánh

Cảm ơn bạn nha >< !
Bọn mình cũng ghi nhận feedback này của bạn :") phần quick save/load thực sự cảm giác nên có sau khi chơi. 
Để sau này bọn mình để ý vụ này hơn.  <3 

thank you! You're so kind.

tất nhiên rùi >< cảm ơn bạn đã ghé xem và ủng hộ.

 Nếu bạn có chơi qua ném cho mình cái cảm nhận với nhé, mình tò mò quá trời XD

There are the coders who have worked hard and make this game possible too ! thanks to them. <3

Sound so fun! i wish we could have the record so we can spred it out into the world :)

The story is a very well writting one, the demo is clever and quickly show the conflic though just short- nature dailoge, which is nice. The main character are very well writen, and her design fit with it very well, i was into her, and care alot about her emotional stage. 
The other character , i still haven't know much about them. So there nothing to be says. But i see you guys had put alot of thought on each of there dailoge even tho the extrem limited time of their screentime . 

Most of the game, i was capture by the story and the clear, well written  dailoge. You guys know what you are doing. and it exciting for me to see what is next.

The only thing keep me down is : i was bored with the part Gray and them try to finger out what are they,...  And the part they talk about the meaning of "dad" and all. The whole thing just did't hit me. maybe these will be these imformation will come for use later, but for me personaly, the coversation just not working for me , feel long, and unecessary, with imformation that i can easy figure out , only need few line. Don't feel presure taking my critict, maybe other like these kind of long casually coversation. This is just my personal thought.

I can see this is  a well done demo with alot of thought and love into it ! Wish you guys all best luck and keep on great work.