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As someone who has initiated first things with men, I don't mind a dom MC! I'd love it! You said you wouldn't make the choices MC does, but I'd go further to say that no one would.

Because the way she's written right now, I don't see a dom MC,  I see an annoying horndog teen trying to look "cool" towards her first crush by being obnoxiously rude and loud with "big dick" comments, like that's all he's good for. Their "relationship" so far is awkward pent up shallow sexual gratification at best. I don't know how she's supposed to be dom, and if her acting like that is supposed to be one, I think it's not a great representation of it sadly.

The talk between MC and Jayce drastically changed after the demo. So far I really like the premise and idea of the game, but the talk between MC and Jayce seems so cringe and very childlike, I really do not mean for this to come off so offensive. I really do enjoy it, I loved how the MC felt hurt and confused with Jayce's first fumbling when they met.

It was very realistic and showed tension which I enjoyed seeing and was wondering how they'd get it patched up. I would have never thought they'd patched things up by her giving him an orgasm through a crowded area... And then later the two getting drunk in a bar, going into a market and MC screaming how he has a big cock... MC is sounding like an out of control underage teen who discovered drinking and freedom to say whatever odd thing she wants.

Overall: Amazing game, outstanding and incredible! But the MC kills it all.