When running the game in my browser I couldn't seem to interact with anything and the window got cut off. Maybe try activating the fullscreen button on the itch edit game menu
I only discovered you had to press use the e button to progress dialogue after deciding to try out my whole keyboard. Some kind of indicator or note would at least for me improve the accesability greatly.
I think you do yourself a disservice with the tl;dr. From what you wrote life really wasn't easy for you in the short timespan. And let me emphasis that 7 days are still a very short timespan to complete an entire game no matter how seemingly simply or short. So I really don't think you should blame yourself for not being able to finish your project. After all, you also don't seem to blame your frind for having trouble finishing their part because life stopped them, so why not show the same courtesy to yourself. So I hope your life gets better after the torbulent week you just had and that you maybe also manage to realize that just not fully giving up, which I for one already cound this post as, is already commendable.
The visual aspect as well as the music I for think are great I was especially pleased by the intro sequence. The only critic that stands out to me is that at least for me the minigame to align the arrow in the electrical boxes felt extremely tedious and unresponsive. Instead of actual circles I, in the end, had to continuesly drag my mouse from left to right or vice versa to actually align them as otherwise they just seemingly wouldn't move with is especially annoying with the amount of electrical boxes you have to fix
