I think you've done a beautiful job with the imagery. From the child and each item that becomes part of the kite, to the part where the kite begins to fly and we see the devastation of their surroundings... The details and emotions in the description are just all well done.
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Exploration of any sort begins with questions, and is facilitated by the information and language we learn or develop along the way to both describe our findings and understand them better. This game offers questions to get us thinking about our personal understanding of our own identities, and provides that language and information to help us through that exploration (in a cool maze room format!)
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