The screenshots look gorgeous! And the logo is really pretty :D thank you for the update!
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What a demo!! I had a lot of fun with this one :D
-Whose route would you choose first? And why?
Probably Vincenzo. Since a good chunk of the demo (the engagement) centers around him, it'll be interesting to see what comes of it. Also, he sparkles a lot.
-What's your favorite scene/event?
Tea with Estella and Henry! It's super refreshing having the original otome protagonist be a good friend and not a twist villain (haha... unless?). I also loved all the hilariously unexpected sprites (Vincenzo holding all the muffins and that one grin Edel makes).
-Are you interested in playing the full release?
Yes! :D
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
Definitely, in fact Edel being nicknamed the bad end butler was perfect because that was exactly what I pinpointed him to be. This one can and will murder Teresa in a heartbeat.
-Other comments:
-Teresa is an excellent protagonist. She's got a really strong and relatable voice, and it's a delight seeing her poker face contrasted with the little thought bubble chibis (brilliant idea, by the way.)
-I liked the terminology you can click on! Even if I already knew what most of the terms meant, Teresa's commentary made the explanations entertaining and smoothly linked back to the story.
-As usual, your art style and storytelling thus far is a delight (I've played through Pre-Odyssey and the jester game before this and they were both great)! I'm looking forward to seeing what's in store for Teresa and the crew. In the meantime, I'll be hunting down the bad endings in the demo.
I finally got round to playing Intertwine (soo true, otojam had absolutely fantastic entries this year and I'm still going through them HAHA) and my gosh not only did the writing feel natural, but the art and music were both wonderful, and the RED STRING. I was sold the moment I realized the string was clickable and it's probably my favorite aspect of the whole game (taking advantage of the medium to convey the story... that kinda thing). So all the hard work in making it as clickable as possible definitely paid off!!! Thank you to the team for putting out the game!! :D
I finally caught up with the update and it was a real treat!
Did you enjoy it overall?
Absolutely! I enjoyed the high school/summer vibes, the story was engaging, and I really love the main friend group. it was cool to see all the new sprites (Luke, Isabella, Faith, Coral, unnamed characters) and sprite variations (uniforms, casual, ball). Ch7 was also the perfect stopping point where it's not so much of a major cliffhanger, but still leaves you wanting more.
Who was your favorite character?
Probably Lori! But I also have a soft spot for Reese and wouldn't have minded him as a route option.
How did you find the music?
Fantastic! It worked really well with the tone of the story and I never found any of them to be repetitive/boring. I also love how that one song plays whenever Luke walks into a room so it's like he has a theme track of his own.
What are you looking forward to for future updates?
Everything that you're aiming for the full game sounds fantastic! I'm especially looking forward to more friend group shenanigans, and a Taylor POV sounds cool.
Anything else you want to tell us?
- The phone transitions back to the usual screen can be a bit janky (repeated final text or glitchy sprite movement), but they don't interfere with the story at all. However being able to see pictures sent over the phone was cool!
- I really liked all the contact photos that Lori has saved on her phone! I know they're extra effort but I appreciated them :D
- I liked the flavor text options! Knowing that there aren't going to be major negative consequences allows for a more relaxing playthrough because I don't have to think too much about picking the 'wrong' answer. I noticed that some of them are locked (probably depending on answers you've selected previously) and I like how that gives Lori consistency.
Overall the Falling Stars update was great! I'm definitely looking forward to the next update (I'm guessing there's more taylor backstory in store) but for now I hope the team has a restful hiatus! :D
I really enjoyed this project! The UI was gorgeous, the cast likeable, and the art wonderful. I also thought the workarounds for coding the trial minigames were executed well. Overall I definitely had a lot of fun with this game and I applaud you for accomplishing it all on your own!
(It's been a while since the game was released, but I also wanted to notify you of a minor bug in the ch4 trial that prevents you from hiding the text box. I just wanted to be able to see the full CGs, but that didn't interfere with my understanding of the story at all!)
This was a really cute game! I loved the style and the use of color in the art :)
1. I think all of the characters have their own charm, but probably Al.
2. I think the moment Al gives his full name was when I was like, ah this kind of humor. It's just so straightforward that I found it hilarious. I also think it's funny that slapping Graham is basically followed up with biting Ine. Protagonist just loves causing chaos wherever they go
3. I'd be down for that! It could be fun to see the cast interacting with each other as well.
Thank you for making this! :D