Closed the game cus the cussing felt off wopadnbwaoudnb
I thought this would be a silly game, why are they talking like that wwww....
Good game, just unexpected intro me guess
I don't get why his brow brows are so important, but you go fam!
(Absolutely love the first drawing form tho-- curly hair all the way!)
(I got an idea that Louhi was inspired by Douma bc they're both: cannibalistic, demonic (?), blond, THICK EYEBROWS
and also bc I scrolled through your twitter likes and slowly connected the dots there (crazy douma fan alert lmao)
but I 100% understand you fam, crazy cannibals wowie did somebody turn the ac up cus it is HOT in here (It's mostly me who's hot but yk the joke was that the men are hot awushd)
AND!!! About my (AMAZING) oc (king cherry) I get that the vn was otome aka female protagonist, but yk, he's a rebel! Rules are made to be broken 😎😎
Oh yeah (last edit hopefully) When I replayed the game some more and found out:
The text didn't fit when I played in minimized screen -- versus when I played in full screen, the text fit the box
it might be a win vs mac issue, or it might just be the way you play (aka full screen or minimized) so yeah, that might clear some things up
😨😨 woah... it's almost as if-- as if the preview pictures don't show that already!!!
lmao I'm jk
on the topic of his second form, I wanted to showcase (😎) this cool fanart I made for little cutie patootie Louhi ^^
The coolest link in existence
Boo! 👻
I've been scrolling through the Yandere tag for a while-- and eventually, I stumbled here! I plan to make some notes and remarks about this game for funsies (and in case u guys need some feedback)
^ I'm saying this bc I already found some small errors
(Mild spoilers, but dw there's no meaningful spoilers)
1) When I click the button to save, it brings me to the load screen (arrow pointing south)
When I chose the load button (arrow pointing north) it led me to the save screen instead
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2) Text often doesn't fit the box
it's not a critical issue, but I just thought it was noticeable enough to mention
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3) Last but not least, there was just a weird janky/funky feel to Louhi when he changed expressions
I got this sense that maybe different people were drawing him, bc his hair's shading, clothes shading, and collarbone were artistically inconsistent
they all had the same lineart/outline, but the coloring was just slightly off (the red cross over his chest also changed to a darker red in some sprites).
Wait-- is this game 18+ ?
I downloaded it without thinking, so when red guy stumbled out of who-knows-where-in-red-room and said he was stimulated, of all things, I freaked out
If possible, could you make it clear-er if it is/isn't 18+ by putting it there?
PLEASE CAN SOMEONE ANSWER ME??? I REALLY WANNA PLAY THIS GAME BUT I ALSO RESPECT BOUNDARIES 😭
The text really threw me off, and the story was bland
Yet, at the same time... the character felt like you had hidden character details; like I could get a sense of his innermost thoughts.
Overall, good game! besides the offputting return button at the bottom of the settings menu and the text
Oh, and speaking of thoughts.... how do you think of this small fic I conjured? : D
Love a Monster - LefetellC - Original Work [Archive of Our Own]
this game was absolutely
GRRRGHKL AHGG It was so **good* amazing, great **fantastic**
the fire n plot were so good; got immersed real fast and it was genuinely stunning
i thought that, maybe, perhaps, even considered... that drawing some symbolistic fanart would be nice...
and what do you know? It's right here>https://x.com/LefetellC/status/1744214820038000731?s=20
I really enjoyed both games and hope you all continue this fantastic story cchain ^^
Just booted it up and I can already tell it'll a good one😼
love the interface and pixelated look, and another point to mention is how the characters (albeit with some messy lines on their clothes lolololol) actually look really cool!
I'd say you got a good eye for colour comp 😽 (as an artist myself I admire the way you drew the charas)
I'd say a disappointment o mine was that the text boxes fit the text size/length. It looked janky when there was a real long paragraph of dialogue, and then the next frame it's just a real small box. You get what I mean?
Uhhh and some bits were missing words like right here, I think you meant to say his **eyes** gleamed
The color of the text was tan (a pretty light color) which blended in with the box, i'd say it wasn't too hard to see but still a bit funky to look at xd
But, i do think **it's not that bad** in campirson to other possibilities, since when you hover ur mouse over it, the bg of the box is dark again so u can see the text. Funky, but it works . it's an **Odd choice**
Nayway, I'm not trying to be some sort of game connaisseur and judge you, I just wanna point out the super cool bits of the game and some things i thought were funny lmfao
i rate it Awesome!!! 1 million/10
Here's a wacky little fanart hope everyone likes it :D
Twitter fanart link
(This is my way of begging you to continue making this game ;,)
I was bored onjauefnfadfdaklnfdkln
Link to short fanfiction based on thiseeeee
Thank you for explaining and clarifying stuff!! ((Glad I played before the downloads went poof lol))
Also, I never knew that the Mc was female lol. The entire time, I played thinking that it was gender-neutral lol
On another note, I wasn't sure if you have gotten the email (despite your bio saying to email u bugs xd), so I'll just say it now. I sent you an email about a problem with your other game, "Ten Symbols of Longevity". CuriosKurio and I noted how the game's files contained the same exact files as "Channel 453".
Hopefully this issue is fixed soon, can't wait to play ur other game(s) :D
I really love the concept: rewinding time, a suspicious TV channel, and a host with uncertain intentions.
The overall visual design really sent me. It was really awesome!! I very much enjoyed playing this and I can't wait for what the future holds ❤
Although, I noticed some weird things while I was playing...
For example, there is an odd space between the punctuation and the word. From the context of the sentence, the word is "cliché" isn't it?
I think it might just be a typo, so no worries!
Additionally, there's also a weird moment where the game refers to Liotte by the player's name. In this case, I've named myself Damon. This may differ from other users, however, I found that the game implied that I was the one who came from the TV. With the context of the game's setting, this is false.
Lastly, less of an issue and more of a personal word choice... What does NG stand for? I thought it may have stood for CG, but the N in place of the G threw me off.
This demo was so unique!
The title screen was constructed really nicely, too. ((My only issue with it is that you can't really get back to the title screen and go back to selecting Acts since it always just restarts your game/coins))
I greatly like the sprites; the animated mouths and expressions were très beaux!! ((It's just kinda funky how the nose blush disappears when they blink lol))
Anyway, really great game. It really set my standards high for Vns lmao
Hello! I apologize for my late reply. I was busy taking screenshots of any moments which occurred to have a mistake: Typo, odd CG, incorrect font color, and improper grammar.
There are many things that I have taken note of by analyzing the text and imagery. Which is why I present to you my discord, ((removed)) . This message would drag on for far too long if I noted *every* small detail I found.
This image happened to show up both times I replayed this scene. As I have stated in my previous message, I am uncertain if this was intentional or an error.
Improper spelling and grammar
"I try to speak up using all my strenght"
I bolded the word which was misspelled. Additionally, you may also see that there is no punctuation.
There are other occasions that I have found to have minor mistakes, such as these...
The font color does not indicate someone is speaking, however, Seth later replies to this 'inner dialogue'. This implies that it was spoken aloud.
When Agni is speaking to the Protagonist, she is portrayed to be a teasing and smug character. It wouldn't come to be a surprise if she used slang while speaking, although, I find that the words are not similar to slang such as "t'is" or "it's". Furthermore, it has become apparent to me that this game often makes mistakes such as leaving out punctuation.
Hence why I believe "t's" is a typo.
I think the game is okay
Agni really got on my nerves a lot, and I found that there were a couple of typos and a few times the background was acting weird ((I got Aaron's sleeping CG in the middle of the laughing part with Seth. I'm uncertain if that was intentional or not.)) It was also difficult to discern whether or not a person was talking or if it was inner dialogue; this is because of the changing font colors and the name on the notepad not showing up at times.
Otherwise, it's an okay game 👍
Good game! It had a good twist, I hadn't expected Jasper to be the Yandere/stalker, so all in all, it was great ((It was hinted however, when I played and saw his terrible mental state and deteriorating house.*
I saw a few misplaced pixels, one on the screen with the rabbit BG, and then one with the door to leave.
Such an amazing demo! As said before by many others, the art style is pleasing to the eyes and gives off a comfortable feeling to it all. It truly is a well-put-together demo, regardless of the lack of music.
Chester himself is an interesting character. I'd like to personally believe he is on the more intelligent spectrum of stalkers due to the glasses sterotype, but through the interactions between the main character and him the events showcase him as a bit less secretive and defensive stalker; he drops his notebook accidentally and risked his chances of being discovered.
He's a bit clumsy but he's a very attractive and charming character.
Yo this game dead asf but I still wish to make a fanfic on dat ass
Edit: Yo I did it, for dat ass
https://at.tumblr.com/lefetellc/service-for-the-blood-god/kmah4xqdut3e
Personally scared to continue playing where I left off because if I do I'm going to reach the end of the demo. Who would want this masterpiece to end?!?! (Sorry if the comment is so long, it's my first time playing such an incredible demo I can't help but fangirl over it)
It's so freaking awesome, whenever I saw the cutscene of the black and white transition between the canvas room and the school, I squealed in excitement at how high-quality it looked. I replayed that exact moment over and over just to look at another piece of it.
While playing, I had to go do something, and when I came back I finally realized the lyrics and the emotional music that was playing. (I didn't hear it before because of how immersed I was in the dark story) This again shows how freaking awesome the game is!
Have I mentioned how manhwa and handsome looking the characters are? They're the right material to simp for, the music, the characters, art and much more contribute to how 11/10 this game is visually and story-lly.
I haven't finished playing but I can already tell this is going to be a banger of a game!