I really liked reading this! Your poetic voice is charming and really delves into sensory experiences in an interesting way ('oh, fall air' and 'GET OUT' really use that to convey the feel of their subjects). I particularly liked the metaphor in 'brain salad'. It really made me think of the duality of "brain sun/ brain black hole", the mind both remembering/ holding and then forgetting/ obscuring in orbital cycles.
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Love this! I really enjoy all the little things the villagers can do and seeing where they like to hang out (I like that the pirates go both to the tavern and to stare at the ocean on the docks).
Is anyone else having trouble getting special events to work on the downloadable version? Might just be something I'm doing wrong, but I noticed it works just fine in the browser version!
The arc of stars
Seen over the waves
Lies down in its halcyon self,
Discoverer of absences, beloved lamp,
some dazzlingly hermetic,
I picture whole streams, new currents,
Abandoned
like colors. Deep colors
BEAUTY
The Deepest Sea
its tongues,
don't overmix
Toward morning, walking along the river,
and sucks the green boundary out.
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I loved playing this! I feel like the descriptions of the different places you could find poetry in were just as poetic as the poems themselves. I'll definitely be back to visit again :)