First I've read of yours but really well done. As others have said I really enjoyed the composition, feels like a very competently done vn, good length too. Art is fantastic always, a little jarring, a little unsettling, but thoroughly enrapturing.
The story is a hell of thing. The thing that really solidifies how well you've accomplished your goal of toxic yuri is basically from the first moment Mill and Ember meet, you can tell there is something more than just a prey-predator relationship. Especially Mill, she's in love before she even knows it yet. A fascinating, grotesque, scary, honest love. I'm not really a toxic yuri girl but I follow your twitter bc you really do post some fantastic art and there is something very powerful in the thesis of your art and this vn which draws me in. A vulnerability, a rawness that I admire. It's emotionally stirring. I congratulate you.