I really enjoyed this! I love the UI and especially how horrifying some of the scenes were initially. The mini screen with mint is so moe and, stylistically, the writing reminded me of some old en vns that I liked (but can't quite recall all that well) so it felt pretty nostalgic. The CGs were good too! (couldn't fit it in smoothly)
I was somewhat surprised at how sweet it ended up being especially near the end and found several of the scenes especially cute on the last true(?) ending, thanks for making this!
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Thank you for such a detailed reply! I agree some more work could have been done on the GUI for readability (And i'll be sure to revisit it to address those issues to make sure that it's readable.)
The project originally was written for a vnjam but we missed the deadline thought we wanted to publish something anyways. I'm not sure if an updated version with more writing is in the cards but I do also agree that I would have liked to write some more to make the ending a bit better.


