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This game deserves more attention, I occasionally come back to play it because it's just that good.

(Minor Spoilers)

This is your best visual novel yet Eroraen! So much of it was done very well. 

The art was fantastic, Serena’s design was very well done and I love the way you used colors during the sunset and starry night scene.

The English, while being iffy at times, is a definite improvement from your previous games, with better grammar and more natural dialogue.

The music was a big improvement from Reiko, too. It captures the theme of the game perfectly.

Speaking of the which, I really like the themes of self-sacrifice, loneliness, love, loss, and grief. It was very touching. When Serena said she was afraid of getting close to Edgar because he was going to inevitably leave made me sad ;~;

Also, it seems that Rebeca managed to sneak into another one of your games, lol

Nevertheless, I really did enjoy this visual novel of yours, and can’t wait for the rest to come!

What does OS stand for?

(Spoilers)

This might be a random question, but when Rebeca's using your name, what exactly is it getting it from? Is it getting it from your Windows username or is it something else? 

I really like some aspects of this visual novel. The music, while simple, fits well with the ambient background noise. The character designs and artstyle are also really cool. The english translation has been a definite improvement, too. 

A few things I didn't like though were the character's face next to the text box; It broke a bit of the immersion for me. And the churning tentacle noises made me feel nauseous, but I'm not sure if that's the intention of it or not lol. This is just a minor nitpick by the way, but Lilieth's eyes were too dark, and the only thing I could see was the red dots, I could only see normal eyes if I looked closely. It'd be good if the eyes were brightened a bit. Unless the character's supposed to be designed like that,

Otherwise, I enjoyed this visual novel. Some decisions had me thinking hard about which option is the most moral and ethical one. The epilogue was awesome, too.

(Spoilers below)

In Blind Love, how come Rin kills you if you refuse to stay with her?

This game was pretty sweet. The main thing I didn't like though is that the character you play just doesn't have much of a personality and can be dull sometimes, but I guess it was a self-insert type of thing and necessary for the secret, I still enjoyed the game though.

(Spoilers)

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