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brainrot wth are you on 

no idea how to spoiler text here but uh it gets a bit detailed even in the prologue though nothing really gross or off putting 

the writing is really bad LOL the story itself seems promising and CG's are like VERYYY good quality,, simply nice to look at but dialogues seem unnatural and not believable, 

part of it might be due to english translation that has a lot of grammatical mistakes THOUGH you still understand everything that's happening. 

good luck Blood Lace x33

From all the ads i saw i thought the game was gonna be at least average but the characters are plain with no barely any personality except for trying to copy Kangel and Ame, the moment where Ai supposedly ?fell in love with Yuuna is not shown at all, which leaves you with no emotional connection to the characters, in addition the choices you make don't change anything at all (except for the last one).

The First Ending is just ?boring. Not much to say, except that it's awkward how much you're to make the game seem edgy

The second one is confusing. Why is she having a mental breakdown over an app that she wasn't even sure that she felt any emotional connection to like couple hours ago? Why is she sad?? What is she blaming herself for?? I'm a very emotional person overall but this didn't make me feel anything except for boredom and disappointment

But for a first project it's pretty solid!! Keep going.