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KomaDog

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A member registered Jun 25, 2021

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Fun start!  

Great art, fun dialogue that doesn't take itself too seriously, and the characters don't seem tropey at all.

I actually really like the personality mechanic-- it's fresh, different, and gives more flavor to the dialogue.  My only criticism would be the specific labels used for the three personalities.  The labels used-- Alpha Chad, Male Feminist, and King of Nerds-- actively made me want to avoid making choices, which I think is kind of the opposite of what you're going for?

Honestly, I'd go with something like Hardheaded, Compassionate, and Intellectual.  But of course, that's just me-- you're the writer, here.  I'm sure you have your reasons, lmao.

Still-- I'm glad I stumbled across this, and will happily keep up with it as you develop.  Keep up the good work, man.