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Good:

• Models
• Animations
• Environmental art
• (mostly) Smooth movement

Bad:

• It's less than barebones, there's no real gameplay, not much to provide feedback on in that respect.
• Camera on rails is a bad idea, trees/etc get in the way, sex scenes are way too zoomed out
• Controls, maybe use the mouse to attack instead of the K button?
• Mid-jump dash looks pretty funny
• What is the jump for?
• Invisible walls
• Jank levels are pretty high
• Unoptimized in terms of graphical load

There is potential here, but it's going to need work.

Very good art direction, character/monster designs are excellent, top-tier atmosphere and environmental art, however, some animations seem stiff (walking and H, mostly).

Good gameplay foundation, though it could use a bit more in the way of offensive options: charge attacks, jump attacks, slide attacks, follow-ups to parries and rolls, etc. The parry should probably be less forgiving timing-wise. In exchange, it could be faster/more explosive while staggering other enemies besides the target which gets knocked down. You might also want to add some kind of stamina system.

H-wise, animations seem stiff/perfunctory, here's a short list of games that I think are good examples of animations:

• Night of Revenge by D-Lis (DLSite RJ405582), top-tier multi-stage animations, quite possibly the best all-around.
• Hidden Realm of the Enchantress by TFANCS (Steam/Itch), single loop, amazingly fluid/juicy animation.
• Troglofauna by White Dog Studios (@KhangBakaPixel on X/twitter), multiple stages, very simple graphical style, fluid multi-stage animations with varying poses and great sound direction.
• Warrior Girl by KooooN Soft (DLSite RJ253103), excellent multi-stage animations, monotonous sound though.
• Ecchi & Craft by Azcat/Dr Vermillion (DLSite RJ434109), multi-stage animations with good sound direction.
  
• Seal of Luterllaria by uzuraZanac (DLSite RJ01042384), multi-stage animations.

If I had to point out specific aspects of a good H-animation:

• How many different parts of the characters are affected by movements/physics/touch.
  
• Reactivity: moans, jiggling, deformation, twitching and particle effects.
• Multiple stages with variations in pose, rhythm and sound.
• Good sound direction, variation in moans, smacks, grunts, etc.

I hope this is helpful.