Really cool game! I'm surprised with how much you were able to get done. I think the art style is very cohesive, and the platforming mechanics were fun! The jump mechanics were good, but the normal lateral movement was a bit unwieldy sometimes when I wanted more fine grain control. One thing this game desperately needs though is the ability to skip or fast forward dialogue considering how much there is! It really becomes a slog, even if the story may be interesting, I want to experience it at my own pace. I had to call it at the sewer meeting because I did not want to go through the effort of talking to everyone there!
I hope you can polish up those rough edges for the final submission, great work!