love the progression of the arrangement, and especially the little arpeggios and runs that come in and out in the background. the waltzy outro is pretty nice also.
opening piano riff is fantastic, almost works as a motif itself. wind melodies definitely are a bit continuous/busy - I'd consider leaning into the style you used for that opening section some more, I think that piano part is actually quite memorable, especially with the sparser countermelody on the wind. also, maybe the final section with the bouncy piano could be augmented by something like some spiccato bass/cello or even percussion?
agree with emirhando that the brass bit's timing is a bit off. made it a little hard to feel the full impact of that big section, although the strings and organ behind it sounded fantastic. loved some of the intense percussion throughout.
definitely agree with Semaj about the lack of a powerful melody, although I actually quite like this as an indie tune - got some lovely guitar sounds going on, and your voice definitely works for that kinda vibe. the lyrics being slightly obscured does make it a little harder to follow the narrative from a theme point of view. definitely did not expect to see this kind of contemporary interpretation in the jam though, love it.
fantastic piece. loved the WoW influence; that was one of the first OSTs I fell in love with, well before I was even a musician. love the structural development, especially the way it brings in the tenser elements and leads into that drone-y bridge.
