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So Sorry, wish I could work on this more, but I've been busy with life events and just existing in this capitalistic hellscape. And now Twine no longer works on my computer...So this project is on hold for the foreseeable future.

So unfortunately I won't be able to edit this for some time, not that I've been able to edit it in a while to begin with due to many life events that just kept happening(See below if curious about those). Even if I had time to work on this project however, I'm no longer able to use the Twine software on my Macbook from 2018 after a few updates that seem to have created some issues with even opening the program. 

If anyone can post how to fix this I'd be happy to do so and pick this project up again to try and get the Jack storyline in, but alas, I'm no coding savant or computer expert: merely a creative writer who wishes they could code.

So apologies to that one guy who left me a voice message about getting to a certain point and it just says "Double-click this passage to edit it." and not being able to do anything further. - I did put a warning at the beginning of the game that says any passage with an (F.P) isn't finished and won't work as they are "Future pathways" that I hadn't written out yet but planned on having one day, so that's probably what you're running into dude, as this is very much NOT a finished project. 

Though there are 4 endings you can end up with if you follow the available options, however.

While Jack isn't a current option I've been meaning to fix the pathway there to where it would just be like the male/female presenting one where it doesn't change anything then and the choice only changes the playthrough when you choose who to interact with later on as you should meet both in the game shortly after that option at the party.

Life events for me btw have been: 

1.  Laid off from the best job I've ever had while bidding for houses and was unemployed for a few months

2.  New job that's physical as shit but gave me 2 raises in the first few months because of how "fast and didn't even need to talk about goals to surpass them !" - meaning no training and I had to implement an organization process and create SOP's for things I was never taught how to do, but simply figured it out due to ADHD and spite.

3. Getting rear-ended as I came to a stop at an intersection red light (Person who hit me "My foot slipped off the break!", The dash came from my savior Josh Knight in his orange car next to me and caught the whole thing and state farm will eventually pay up one my lawyers finish with the mound of paperwork I sent to them with all my medical visits and bills.

4. Getting rear-ended on the same street 2 months later while drunk in the passenger street in the rental from the first accident (hit an run that time. (lawyers haven't even had time to start on this one cause the first one is still in process lol)

5. Fibromyalgia Pain Flare-up due to 3 & 4 and now I'm in pain constantly and using legal self-medication tactics to cope as I apply for a disability that takes over 200 days to determine weather or not I'm disabled....While I run through my meager savings account that was meant to be my house downpayment one day.

7.  Unemployment denied me as I quit due to my health, and they even stated "She quit due to health" in my determination, but then stated it's not under the laws of exemptions. Even though that exception is listed plainly on their website as "Quitting because your health left you with no reasonable alternative but to quit." So, like, thanks UI, now I have to have a phone hearing to appeal something that's directly stated in your damn laws as a viable exception to quitting.

6.  Can't convince my father not to vote for Trump... I don't know how to deal with such stupidity caused by his Fox News obsession and misogyny.  But if anyone wishes to try and change his mind, here's his number lol (414)-241-0757 - cus I just can't deal with his bullcrap anymore.