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The story is sad...sob

However, it's really interesting, wrapping the romance in a harsher version, yet still feels compelling and intriguing. It uses a third-person perspective, which I think is quite good...

Interesting story.

I really like that they had to sacrifice something they shouldn't have to fight for.

Thank you very much,

I hope to find it soon haha

Thanks for the feedback!

I hope I can still improve it.

Yeah! Thanks, yeah.

Maybe I just prefer writing slow-burn stories, so that's how it is, hehe.

Hmm, thanks!

Sometimes angels are depicted as mysterious figures, a calm yet deadly approach in my opinion.

Thanks, hehe.

I don't know, but I prefer an approach that describes something in a non-specific way. It could be said to be open to multiple interpretations.

Thank you very much.

Honestly, I had a little trouble imagining the characterization of the angel and the protagonist, but I got a bit of an idea halfway through writing it.

good one, Othmara still await for that child hahaha

yeah hehehe, took re-read after submitted and i didn't expected hahaha

hehehe, some angelic doesn't represent it at all?

yeah, thought to read that once again and it's like damn... so dark psychology. but, yeah thanks hahahaha

Thank for answer

i still waiting for future update this gam