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fun interaction game~I would suggest you enable the "full-screen button" so as I could play it in browser. Besides, try to have some related background so as the player find themselves more immersive.

This is so far the only long-text word adventure game which enables me to scroll down. I love the outline of this story, but i would suggest to have more interaction with the player or that will be a little bit direct and boring~

A very immersive story design~And i would suggest you have some related background or background music to fit with the tone of the story! The text may be designed much bigger since I find myself a little bit hard to read

nice design~I would suggest you enable the "full-screen button" so as I could see the detail of what the book looks like!

what a cute gameeee! Is all the figure handwritten by you? I love the sound effect like knocking sound, it really makes me feel immersive during the play. I am hoping to see more endings if asking for improvement.

After you tabbed that, the timer starts to count. That is where I set the code

it should works, have you tabbed the “start” button in the vault theft scene?

it is co cuteeeeee! I love this game and it makes me feel cozy and relaxed during the play! I am waiting to see you add more onto this~~~

glad to have a good ending for my run. The story is very attractive and what I advice is to have more graphic design to help with the immersive plot!

same for the “full screen button”! You need to enable that button so as we could see the full text in webpage~

Really cute game~it is easy to play but full of fun~thank you for mentioning the origin of this type of game and I would learn more about it later after class~

Really cute game~The background reminds me of some kind of Japanese comics lol, not sure if you intend to do so. The text is very reader-friendly compared to others. Good job!

Nice game! Love the background and it is another word maze~It looks similar to the other two games I have played so far, and I think all of you do the best! 

I love the design of this game, which is full of mystery. However, I think more tips should be provided during the game, since sometimes I felt myself lost🤔. maybe it is only me hahhh, then never mind~

I love the design of building a story on my own~And the instructions are very direct and easy to follow. The only thing I suggest is try to make the game more interesting? Like give some limited sets at the beginning.

yep, it is like another word maze~pretty cool with the background. At first, I am really confused of which is the right path. I love the design of crossing the impossible path which makes me feel that I am closer to the victory~

It is one of the most impressive game I have played so far! I love the cute design of the cat as a cowboy fighter, really really cool! I love everything of this game, the background music is suitable as well~The only thing sad is I lose my run🙀My cowboy cat dies😭

The setting is great, but I am a bit confused about how to continue to the next scene. And I suggest that a kid’s crying sound should be added to add the tension of the game.

It will be better to leave an empty notebook for the player to take down what they have chosen!

This is a typical text-maze and I have experienced similar game once in my another class. The background fits the story and it is great to see all the tab-letter are highlighted in different color, which will be less difficult for players to find~

I love the sound design here. The sudden appearance of the emergency sound makes me feel anxious!The story setting is imaginative, and I like the start page, which has stars on sky. It fits the theme!

The effect of the text is really cool and it helps the game to be creepier and more immersive~I love the background coming with the text as well, it fits what has said. The only thing is that maybe have an end? Even if a rush end. It will make the game more complete<

The beginning part is really really cool! It is like a movie, I would try to use the video as a component next time since it really works~ Besides, I suggest the design of each path should be less direct or it will be too quick for the player to find out the way( since I just randomly select path but it works haha). At this stage, the game is great, if asking for improvement, the design of the paths can be more complex and less direct.

The background of the game is really cooooool! It fits the theme of sitting on the quad and doing the reading. I love the diary mode which is cute. It is like an invitation to the reader to see what is going on around the author, like a “friend” mode.

I love this story! I have seen your post on Bluesky talking about your project, and i think your work is definitely successful! I love the ending part, the vanishing text is cool~Besides, I love the background, it fits the idea~

Here is the correct order (use when you get confused in "The Alchemist's Vault Theft" scene)

Questions to Elira:

1. "Do you grow phoenix dust ingredients?" ➤ “Yes, but not that rare. I’ve only seen it once.”
2. "Was anyone with you in the garden?" ➤ “No, I was alone.”

  3. "Do you trust Bran?"➤ “Not really. He’s ambitious, but reckless.”

Questions to Bran:

1. "Did you see anyone in the dormitory?" ➤ “Yes, Joran was there too.”
2. "Do you know where the vault is?" ➤ “Of course, everyone in the academy does.”
3. "What were you studying yesterday?" ➤ “Just potion theory and sigil carving.”

Questions to Torren：

1. "Do you like your job?" ➤ “It’s boring, but it pays.”
2. "Did you see Bran last night?"➤ “No, I didn’t see him or anyone.”
3. "Were you armed during your shift?" ➤ “Always. It’s standard protocol.”