Thank you very much for your feedback! I'll try to revise the script for the upcoming v 1.1 release in the following weeks but please don't expect huge changes to it... at least I hope it would make the experience more enjoyable for anybody! ^^:::
Thank you for you in-depth critical analysis of my fvn submission. I do agree that both the overall story, the characters and (especially) the writing needed more polished, that's something I'll try to take in consideration and focus in my future works. I hope you'll continue to follow and play my future projects, and keep sharing your feedback with me. Until next time! :3
Thank you so much for playing and for your honest feedback! I'll try to tweak the script a bit with the new 1.1 version coming out in the following weeks, so please check it out! :3
Thank you so much for this extensive in depth analysis of my furry vn. I preferred to use a blank state main protagonist so the player can relate more with Alden and the other cast of characters.
I used many external assets since I didn't had any time for commissioning outsourced artists and I'm not an artist myself ^^;
Thank you so much for your review. I wanted to tell a story about themes I experienced when I played some DnD sessions with my own friends. I know I'm not a skilled writer since I didn't took any writing 101 classes and this is one of my first attempts in creating something of my own from scratch. I hope my future projects will help me to enhance my writing skills. I also plan to release a new version of my fvn with the Android release and some tweaks on the script in the following weeks, so please check it out whenever it'll be available! ;)
Thank you for you depth analysis of my fvn. I planned the meta part of my story being inspired by one of my childhood books (The Neverending Story). The choices through the various chapters seems a bit unimportant but I basically aimed for small variations. Basically, I used 3 variables (trust, honesty and distance) to determine the outcome in the final chapter.
Since I'm no artist I used the assets provided from the jam artists, choosing the one I liked most.
Thank you so much! 💙 As I already wrote in the other comments to my jam submission I am currently working on the Android version for the upcoming 1.1 release in the following weeks so please check it out once it'll be released! :3
Thank you so much! I'm really happy I managed to submit it early. It's my first completed (for a game jam) visual novel, so I'm excited to finally have it out there. Hope you enjoy it if you give it a try!
