While I mostly enjoy the overall concept and the art, it's really sloppy on scene side (and combat tbh but I'm willing to ignore it). Average 5 sentences per scene is very few and feels more like whole thing is a throwaway gag: "haha, anon got his gf raped/stolen again, moving on". Wish there was way more writing and staging going on especially as most scenes do deserve it.
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