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Good luck! Looking forward to seeing it expand. I figured the extra characters didn't have the time to shine because of time constraints but still wanted to extend the feedback 😊

I love this one. Think it hits all 3 aspects. I failed the first time I played but managed to get it the second time around. The overall end message hits home for me. Huge fan of the art style too it was very satisfying. 

The voice acting was amazing, gave me a good laugh! The gameplay concept is very fun too, got me replaying a few times. Good job!

Really enjoyed playing this one, pacing was well executed. I really loved all the details that interacting with the environment gave you and the way it supported the storytelling. I think what stuck with me is that both characters showed flaws in their behaviour. I was empathetic towards Leon at the start but there were moments I didn't agree with his choices. I think that captured how complicated and layered relationship problems could be. Art style is beautiful too :)

I loved this game! I'm a moth to the fantasy genre in general. You're writing is immersive and enjoyable. I was very impressed with the worldbuilding you achieved and I was attached to both characters by the end. Also the gameplay was very fun. I was not expecting the time consequence when taking too long to choose a spell but I really enjoyed the limitation! I think the only thing that lost me a bit was the amount of mages introduced near the end. Think in a longer format I wouldn't have minded but I felt a little overwhelmed trying to remember which mage was on what side and their purpose. They all served a similar purpose for the story progression and in that case I think it would've been easier to follow along with less characters to focus on in that moment. I don't want to spoil for anyone who hasn't played but the way Maelor was used I think worked really well. Having a character on Kael's side to mirror that could have been an interesting contrast. However that's just my interpretation. The cover art is very beautiful too!

I think the concept was intriguing but I got a little lost trying to understand the meaning, especially in the end.  I really liked the brain scan portion. I also liked the start and the discussion about the stitches, think it was clever. I replayed it a few times to see if it would help but in my case I have yet to gather an understanding. 

This hit home for me. As an artist I have found myself in similar stages that your story depicted. Very beautiful writing. It captured the dark aspects of creativity. The music paired with the writing made me uncomfortable but not necessarily in a negative way. Just felt like I was looking at my fears and doubts through a magnifying glass. Despite any gameplay mechanics implemented I still loved the story told. This is going to stick with  me for a while.  

loved the art style! The gameplay was very immersive. Took me a bit of thinking to figure out how to advance in certain areas. Got stuck for a little bit at the end trying to figure out how to get to the kittens. Playing as a cat is always a win too!