This is starting good, correct the little errors and you have pretty good start. I hope to keep watching this story unfolds.
You say at the start that you will be able to choose paths more loving and others hardcore, but starting pretty on the hard and wet side, i dont mind but some people do and will comment over it if you don´t change that description or make options to be less hard. I would say someting more on the lines of "some girls will treat you hard and other treat you lovely" if that is the road you are choosing for this.
As you have asked, mi opinion in memes is, dont use then in between, or just before sex scenes, will feel "cringy" for a lot of people. If you want to use them in the normal story parts i suppose people will not mind it a lot.
I hope this continues, this have very good potential.
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