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Loved the art and concept!!

• Beautiful BGs, sprites, CGs and UI design
• Pretty music.
• Lovely melodramatic atmosphere in the beginning.
  
  

Things to improve: Spelling/grammer.

‘neck neck'

‘.;’

‘[charactername]]’  --> after character's name is shown, an extra ']' is displayed on screen

‘rhytmic’

‘ner'

Anyway LOVED the VN!

I was attracted to the tea drawing and the butler but especially the tea. Reminded me of the beautiful pixel art by Jubilee. https://x.com/16pxl/status/1343637070464438272 

The sprites and CGs are gorgeous and the story was fun and campy.

Technical problem:  prevented me from proceeding to an alternate pathway to an ending. Game crashed (closed out) trying to say “Oh… Thank you” to the butler in the garden.

Nitpicks:

• Basic UI design
• Suggestion: The characters sprites should be bigger to see their details or placed closer to the screen
• lacklustre music

Overall had fun!!

good luck lol

Thank you for playing! :D

Review: I enjoyed the visuals and most of the characters. Your UI system is very well polished and the music was charming! Only thing that bugs me is how the men's noses were illustrated.

Here's videos of me trying to voice act your game!

https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4wbwCRilYmYMt1X2XNzqFLN2vz9_V7cM&si=40PMiy3p...