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Решил, значится полистать игры в итче по тегам и нашёл это. Довольно неоднозначный проект, полный вкусовщины.

Спойлеров в данном комменте будет много, поэтому если не хотите их словить, советую сперва поиграть и сформировать своё мнение.

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Буду честен, данная ВН довольна интересна концептуально. Новелла, где ГГ застрял в теле фурри-бобра-енота Моники из ДДЛК прям как в Дельтаруне, пока "судьба"/местный рассказчик прямо как 75% целевухи данной игры хочет чтоб все пообжирались? А добавки можно!? Но только, по моему мнению, не всё так прекрасно. Во первых, что бросается в глаза сразу: визуал. Даже не самый далёкий поймет, что визуалка данной новеллы была сделана ИИ. Конечно, некоторые как и я могут на это закрыть глаза, но многим другим это может не понравится и даже отвергнуть от данной ВН. Хотя подмечу, что главное меню отдаёт ФНаФ'цом (в хорошем смысле) и даже нагоняет чуточку атмосферы. Насчёт музыкальной составляющей ничего подметить не могу: треки не плохие но и запоминающихся нету. Сюжет сам... ех? Он был бы одной из сильных сторон новеллы если бы не одно жирное НО - "судьба" даже не скрывает кто она такая. По моему скромному мнению упущение. "Но Джувильер Фанатикосо", умно подметите вы, "разве Мия не сразу бы выдала нам что здесь есть божественный старикан над нами?". Отвечу вам так: тогда можно было бы отыграть что, хер знает, у неё шарики за ролики уехали и она бредет, либо типа она нагло врёт чтобы объединится с нами а потом просто ёбнуть когда получит тело. По крайне мере скажу так, что все персонажи более-менее прописаны нормально: Мия наваливает говна, Моллюск нас сожрать хочет, Лиса-маг на лоу кортизоле, суккуба хочешь трахнуть, (про чёрта забываешь потому что буквально сайдовый перс) а нарратор в первый раз и правду делает джампскейр. На последок отмечу, что нравится что автор оставила пару секретов в файлах игры. Так, на дессерт. 

В итоге скажу, что у игры есть потанцевал, даже огромный. Желаю успехов разрабу, а я ставлю

6/10

P.S: если вы это прочитали, то во первых спасибо, а во вторых ловите подходящий скриншот Кошмарионна в награду за прочтение данного бесформенного куска текста.

I am not a hypnosis fanatic (see what i did her?? >:D) myself... but THIS GAME FUCKING ROCKSSS!!!!

I am going to note that this comment will spoil everything, so if you don't want to catch those, go and try this game yourself. Trust, this is a 5 star meal.

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Now that I've got this out of the way, I loved every moment of it. The writing is very good in my humble opinion. There's two things I don't like though. First, why there's only one buffer dialogue template when you don't have anything to do?? Please, at least two more. Second is... Why the two other places (gym and cafe) aren't used?? I suppose those will be used in the future updates, so you can close your eyes on this one. Love the 4th wall breaking bit that the developer of this game IS also developer of the app we're using. Although, maybe this upside-down dick face (not insulting) used this as an excuse to not write a "mastermind from Yandere Simulator that will sell you Korean nukes for pantsu shots" type of character. Fair, can't blame the guy. The visuals are the MASSIVE, ENOURMOUS and MESMERIZING (pause) pro of this game. The art is made delicilously. You literally can take random scene shots as pfps or wallpapers and I won't blame you for that. Artist deserves their pay.  Also love the variety fo transformations, probably the main thing of the game (i believe i 100%'d it btw. thanks for the frebbi fazballs in the comments for the help too.).Very cool. My favorite is probably the Milk one. The way of obtaining Ass is very creative. Oooh, and minigames, loved all of them (except the goth one. Fuck goth minigame. Stupid ass candles and stupid ass letters. Who do you think I am, a scientist??? I am a Deltarune fan, I can't read!). Though, I don't know if I can, but could you add something belly related? If not, it's fine. Probs should add more things to the shop too, pretty barebones IMo but still works. Sadly, the one thing I can't comment is on the sound/VA because I played with no sound. Once I'll be able to get time to hear it, I'll update the comment. For now, though, I'll give:

8.5/10

Keep up the works, man!

Hello again! I was just spending my time being when I remembered this game. I browsed through some comments (just realized that this game isnt fresh, LMAO), then saw the postmortem post. I suppose I wasnt too far off calling Geist "demon". Crazy how people can just think of an idea then turn it into something valuable and beautiful. I swear, one day, I'll create a VN myself too because FUCK YEA THIS RULES!!!

Normally, I never write comments, but I'll tell you what, screw it. ⚠️ Spoilers warning! ⚠️ 

This VN is very interesting in that it shows you Geist as the main villain... but he's more of a neutral guy? Like, hear me out, I only finished the Kalei ending, but it was enough for me to see that Geist genuinely loves the MC.

I love the way the game looks like, by the way. The color palette, the backgrounds, the little animations... mwah. The only thing is that I slightly don't like how the faces look - too not detailed - but it's purely my own tastes. They look fine enough to portray the emotions how they should be.

The plot itself is extremely simple, but it's carried by the thoughts of MC/their interactions with our blonde yandere husband. It was clear the writers tried to create an image of a socially anxious and (somewhat) mentally ill person, and IMO... very good. Especially loved the way MC collected the confidence over the route to finally face their main problem, The Geist.

Oh, also, I'll throw in a theory(?) in here, since it's pretty much implied: Geist is our schizophrenia. Yup, I think he is. Listen, MC literally tells us he ALWAYS was around her since middle school (and, how they said, probably were stalking before that) and never left their side. He also just... appears by our side whenever he wants to? Like, what kind of demon we're talking about??

VA's are perfect!!! Definitely the strongest point of this Visual Novel. I love the British accent of Geist (I mean, I was William Afton stan in the past... soooo maybeeee?), really adds to his character: a sophisticated man who always watches and follows your every step, and always ready to put you down if you dare to rise higher to the sun tha he'd like to. Tumblr sexyman type, the perfect kind. VA of Kalei is a perfect fit too: A chill, a little higher compared to Geist, but definitely friendly. Just a guy who wants to have a good time. The soundtrack is good, nothing notable, though. 

I think that's all I have to say? The only notable bad thing about the novel is that it's literally so small I speedrun it in class at school (about 30 mins) and finishing this "review" at home now. Please, ChatterCap, give us MORE!!! I'll definitely try the other games once I have the free time (if they are not the same length, or, god forbid, shorter than this. PLEEEEAAAASEEEE—), though. Have a great time!

EDIT: Forgot to say that I played all of this on web-android version. Everything was perfectly working.

8/10