I downloaded this game today and played it. I was surprised how good of a job you did, better than I could have ever done
One suggestion: I would like to see the npc's have a voice, I think that would add a lot more contrast to the game.
I did have one issue with the game when I was using telekinesis to fix the bridge that I couldn't place the missing piece of the bridge and it would fall into the water and i couldn't retrieve it.
Besides the bride I thought that the game was great! keep up the good work.