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i love this so, so much. your writing is incredible and i crave more of it

though i wish kit could give aubrey a tiny little smooch 😔

omg i love this so much, your writing feels so effortlessly funny

a very promising start! excited to see where the story goes

oh man this is great,, keep on keeping on!

also i desperately want an option to have dyed hair pretty please? 👉👈

your writing is beautiful ✨️

usually i dislike stories that start out from someone else's pov but yours pleasantly surprised me, i like how you incorporated character customization into it

i hope we'll get many opportunities to be a protective slightly-older sibling because i am already way too attached to romare

for some reason carter is very 'hopper from stranger things'-shaped in my mind's eye which becomes a truly hilarious mental image when we learn more about him

also the discord link is expired, how dare you tease us so /j

i love this so, so much! this genre of horror is exactly my cup of tea (and the possibility to add a bit of romance to an otherwise chilling adventure is a delightful bonus)

i like your implementation of the journal, very creative! is it an image or text on a background? 🤔

also, encountered a bug: i went to the pub as my second choice (first being the church) and overheard the information, as opposed to talking to someone there, but the journal entry is about an informant and the conversation next day also alludes to me having met someone 

i enjoyed this very much, your writing is very pleasant (i dunno how else to describe it haha but i love it)

the angst! *chef's kiss* it hurts in the best way, i'm excited to see where this goes. some sort of tragedy is imminent, i'm sure

oh, speaking of trigger warnings

i think off-screen death in (or shortly thereafter i guess? if we're being pedantic) childbirth might be a good one to add, it's quite a bit different from regular ol' death/manslaughter

woo! i'm happy to hear that, thank you :D

good luck with the rewrite! i enjoyed this version of the demo and am very excited to see what you do with it ✨️

i adore your writing with all my heart, this is a very intriguing demo 💜 

[SPOILER ALERT]

one thing i felt was missing was to call out MC's father for being a hypocrite; he's in love with a Republican but disowned his child for being involved with a cult leader (which, yea, a bit of a red flag) who also was very much against the Emperor. tbh i feel like Nicholas would not be a fan of that so i kinda hope it would be addressed in that route

kind of like 'seducing-your-sister's-fiancée' route. i like that you can be angry both at your father (who has an affair of his own) and Harry (it takes two to cheat, after all), who got the better end of the deal, or so it seems. and i'm very curious how they got found out, there's obviously a reason why this couldn't have been resolved quietly 

it'd be nice if there was an option to exhibit more of a all-cops-are-bastards attitude, especially when meeting the detective one-on-one

like, i'd very much remind him (during the call and/or in person) that i asked for a lawyer and there's none present. i know declining the offer to meet doesn't fit the plot but i'd like to at least be difficult and unwilling haha

maaan this made me sob 

you have a talent for writing angsty/bittersweet things

i was never interested in undertale fan games before, the keyword being before

this is so, so beautiful, and made me cry a few times

your writing is incredible, i'll be checking out your other works (and also re-playing this one, got two routes down so far!)

the confidence boost is absolutely deserved, you did a really good job with it! i read a lot of interactive fiction (we love escapism in this house lol) and your nsfw scene execution is definitely in the top 10 of the list

not the main part i love about the story tho, obviously :p

no words can express how much i loved this demo

inexplicably, it gave me a lot of gender euphoria especially the nsfw bit haha

i'm incredibly excited to see where this goes <3

didn't expect the reaper to give me cuteness overload

this was a lovely demo, can't wait to see the full game!