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The art style of this is stunning - I love all the level and character designs. It has a very mysterious vibe and the music really helps it. I was having an issue where certain platforms wouldn't let me jump for some reason but that was the only technical issue I had. The ending was super cute too it made me feel warm and fuzzy. Awesome job!!

The color and art is so fantastic. This game in all aspects feels really well done and polished. Awesome job!

I really like what you've done - and the art is fun too! I think the art could use a little more finish to it - maybe bring it into digital and bump up the contrast? 

The writing is so so good and it was a very fun experience! I agree some visuals would be nice but the game turned out great.

I feel like this already has a lot of personality to the writing - I am excited to see how it develops based on what you've said.

I like the story - I would work on the spelling, grammar, and general formatting but obviously this is a draft. It would be nice if you had a chance to go back to the start at the end of a route so you can play both the paths.

I really liked the different endings! Maybe certain ones can have a random element like a dice roll in order to succeed?