Oh totally missed that. Thanks for letting me know, I'll get to fixing that!
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Thanks for the lovely amount of feedback! This story was largely inspired by the American road trip me and my sister took almost a decade ago. I'm glad my intent of a chill, cozy trip between friends came across, and you enjoyed the characters :)
I do get what you're saying about how densely packed it feels. And I hadn't realized at first that some sentences feel over-nested. I WAS wondering whether or not I should add more to the story, like couple more locations, but I decided to go ahead anyway since there's some other stuff I kinda got going on atm and I didn't want worry about juggling TOO many projects. Doesn't mean I won't go back into this story! I do like the idea of expanding on this story a bit more, so there's plenty of opportunities to work on those details.
Thank you once again for your feedback! :D
Fun fact: I had the world map of Final Fantasy 9 in my mind while drawing these! Another fun fact: I was trying to make a variety of maps including maps of buildings like hotels and mansions, but I wasn't really satisfied with any of them plus the fact I got sick which made fall behind so I decided to just focus on world maps. Drawing them felt a bit more natural to me anyway so that helped.














