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Thanks for the feedback, I'm happy to know you enjoyed it. :D I'm especially happy to hear the protagonists personalities shined through. Sorry about any confusion some of the dialogue sections might have caused, I'll keep that in mind in the future.

Hey! Sorry I'm only replying now, I've been busy. Anyway, thanks for the feedback, I can see why you would say some information is dumped a bit suddenly. I probably would have woven in details a bit more naturally to this story if I didn't impose some other projects on my shoulders ahaha. I might come back to this story to expand it a bit more so I'll keep your tips in mind!

Oh totally missed that. Thanks for letting me know, I'll get to fixing that!

Thanks for the lovely amount of feedback! This story was largely inspired by the American road trip me and my sister took almost a decade ago. I'm glad my intent of a chill, cozy trip between friends came across, and you enjoyed the characters :)

I do get what you're saying about how densely packed it feels. And I hadn't realized at first that some sentences feel over-nested. I WAS wondering whether or not I should add more to the story, like couple more locations, but I decided to go ahead anyway since there's some other stuff I kinda got going on atm and I didn't want worry about juggling TOO many projects. Doesn't mean I won't go back into this story! I do like the idea of expanding on this story a bit more, so there's plenty of opportunities to work on those details.

Thank you once again for your feedback! :D

I thought I already gave my comment but apparently I didn't. :o Anyway, really enjoyed this! I really got into it while playing and trying to get as many achievements as possible. Loving this new way to appreciate poetry!

As someone who likes mecha stories, this is right up my alley especially with such a interesting premise. Wouldn't mind seeing more!

Interesting question! I've never done those before, tho I'm from Finland so I'm not sure about the logistics (unless digital community copies are a thing). Still, I might look into it.

Fun game! I especially liked the UI, and how this game can be easily played on laptop (which I did).

Thanks! I didn't consider public domain images before, but I could make a version that includes them. :)

I love the idea, and the heist aspect is a bonus for me!

The title alone is already letting me know this is a fun game for groups. There really should be more fantasy settings in the wild west genre.

Title alone drew me in, 10/10

Oh dang I totally missed that! :O Thanks for pointing it out, I'll fix it either tomorrow or Monday, I got work this weekend.

Nice game premise,  and the instruction pages are nicely done too!

This game looks like it's fun to play! The rules are very clear too and I like the various character types one can choose from.

Ooh gotta check those out :o

I think this is the first I've seen a game like this use dominoes for gameplay, but I like it! As someone who likes paintings and the occasional wondering what lives other people live, this game is perfect for me :D

Love the idea and the visuals are done nicely! Nice work :D

Finally a game fit for my teenager self. Nicely simplistic, and I think it's this game also doubles as a 48-Word game.

Loving the visuals and the premise. This game sounds like it would be fun at parties (tho hopefully not the kind that end in actual death ahahahaha)!

Thank you so much! I'm especially glad to hear you like the mechanics, and I'm also glad the immersive feel works too :D

This game looks interesting. I really like the visuals too!

The premise already drew me in. More games should be about cryptids I think :)

Nice visuals, and instructions are to the point. Well done!

I love the visuals and the concept! Nicely done.

This is perfect I love a good whodunit!

This bookmark really seems like it'll be fun to use! Nicely executed, good use of space with the instructions especially.

A Pokemon game in a bookmark was not what I expected, but I wholly welcome it! :D

I really love how this game integrates the book being a dungeon to explore! Very simple and clear instructions too.

Deceptively simple sounding game but sounds really fun too! Have to remember this one :)

This really looks like a neat tool! Love how there's room for variety in creation process.

Thanks! This Jam was fun in more ways than one. A game with friends sounds like a real fun time too actually, such as optionally compete on who gets the funniest result XD

:O What a twist!

Fun fact: I had the world map of Final Fantasy 9 in my mind while drawing these! Another fun fact: I was trying to make a variety of maps including maps of buildings like hotels and mansions, but I wasn't really satisfied with any of them plus the fact I got sick which made fall behind so I decided to just focus on world maps. Drawing them felt a bit more natural to me anyway so that helped.

Thanks! A seafaring adventure game sounds like a fun idea :D

Was drawn in by the artwork and the heist premise, and was then further taken in by idea of using a Jenga tower as a game play mechanic! It's such a simple yet original idea :D

I love the idea of a single page mystery, and the art style is charming!

Already an excellent addition to this jam! While I have used the other 'Human made' made images, these splash images are really nice too, really helps emphasize the point.

The cover artwork and the tagline drew me in immediately thank you. This concept of playing as the living weapon of many fantasy stories/RPG is also a fun new spin!

This is really a fun idea to handle combat! Simple yet creative :D