this shit was wild, had a great time hanging out with these scary girls. i really liked how every interaction they have with the protagonist is with (barely) disguised contempt. "where's my hug?" line made me laugh. effective characterization of an idiotic man, evil through thoughtless ineptitude in a "mid-oughts" kind of way. these boys rly didn't have any shame!!
can't say i found it very Hot, but it was thrilling (and maybe too thrilling, in vi's case, which i did have to skip past) and that's no bad thing.
presentationally Excellent, full marks. looking forward to what yall cook up next !!