Im already on the discord, so ill engage more with people on there because it seems like an awesome community 馃槃
I'm going through the revamp atm and it looks so great! So looking forward to seeing the rest of the chapters when they're out. I'll be recommending it to my friends who enjoy these sorts of stories too
Haha, no, honestly im exactly the same! I feel like a newbie writer all the time, all my works are my own private stories for now.
i think the term is pantser/plantser (where you write on the fly/by the seat of your pants, or where you only partially plan Chapters without planning the entire story, I'm more of a plantser so I plan a few chapters ahead when I write. But after reading the ending of your original version, my mind just raced and I could picture what I'd do for the first 3-4 chapters and what I'd do for an overall story and ending (but of course this is your story, not mine so I respect that totally!)
I'm very much a novice myself so I get what you mean there. The offer is always open if you ever want and it is a genuine one. I have a few friends who write, some irl and some online, who ive had as critique partners/beta reading, and thrown ideas with each other, so I doubt I'd consider you a pain in the ass if you ever invited me to help, even if its just to bounce ideas off each other. And yeah, i noticed your unique style with grammar, and thats one of the best parts of the story, it made it feel like actual people talking to each other, not just characters in a story (if that makes sense) 馃槀
as I said, offer is always open, you don't have to take it, of course, and I wouldn't mind since it's your story and idea and no one else's, but if you ever want some help in any way, I'll be here, and hey, that offer can stand for Straight?! Or any other project you work on because I'd love to see how you as a writer and your style develop in the future. You have a lot of skill and talent!
Honestly, i feel obsessed with the game, my mind keeps thinking of a potential plot for a sequel (i would imagine it only being one sequel and that being it so you wouldn't run the risk of overdoing it).
I love writing and am an amateur writer (hoping to get published one day) so seeing stories as beautifully written as yours makes my heart sing!
Sorry if this is really forward but if you ever decide on writing a sequel but feel you aren't sure what to do for it and want an outsiders opinion/beta reader/help with an outline or anything let me know! I'd be more than happy to help (and I wouldn't want anything in return for it, being able to help you at all with this amazing story would be enough for me!)
Ive followed this story on and off for a few years now and only just saw the ending and i loved it! I so hope Aaryn makes a sequel because he really knows how to tell a story and i am desperate to know what happens between Zack and Braden!
Unlike so many other games, the sexual content is lower, but my god when those scenes come up they're pure perfection! And honestly, I love that the game isn't just about sex but actually is about their relationship around that aspect. I will continue to re-play this game for a long time because I absolutely loved everything about it
