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oh , thank you, i sincerely hoped for you to not take offense to my post, im glad my comment help, and dont worry about not having enough time to reply, i actually kind off expected my comment to go unnoticed... and of course! im glad to have help, i loved this VN so much and am seriously hoping for the chapter 2, i loved the reality slapping kind of thing, than an immediate shock from the suddenly complete change of world setting

to start—

the characters are a bit bland, although Kaal is emotionally relatable, atleast in chapter 0-1, going forward, he becomes repetitive— kind of like he is implying that he has no other choice, and that there MAY be hope, and thats another thing, too negative, he is a person, yes he studied a subject most(i can somewhat say so as well, some what) is very demanding of attention, and well... boring, it shouldn't be enough of a reason to make someone be monotonic.

and chapter 2(where Kaal starts to work with Garak, i think???)

is very inconsistent, at one point it stated that its been a few days, then the next second— Garak states that it was a "rough first day"

and i sincerely think everything went by so fast that there was no way for me to understand or know more about the characters and their motives, if you dont introduce the character bit by bit from the introduction of the story, you introduce parts about him throughout the chapters, but by the second chapter, the only thing we know about Kaal is that he is a guy that studied physics, and he is very negative

but with all that, i hope that there may be more with this, i sincerely loved it, its amazing, the world is beautiful and surreal, and it was a nice experience to read this

this game has potential(though i wonder if the art of the characters is AI-made?)

the world, the settings, is very beautiful, and i like it maintains a semi-realistic scenario, and i sincerely like how its emotionally relatable— in Kaal's case, at least

imma comment two times, one sugar coated and the other evaluative(kind of, but pls take my word as a grain of salt)

gonna try this game soon, super exciteeeeed

boncur

(i just call it "p" and it sound cuter in my head for some reason XD)

[the newest continues running...]

biskon

(now thats just cute)

[the newest continues running...]

bokiv

(omg HAHHAAH)

[the newest starts to run!]

butsin

(oh i thought u got tired of me,then you shouldnt apologize because i shouls HAHAHAHA)

[the newest tries to escape...]

blicin(XD)

(dont apologize i should be the one doing so XD sorry dude)

[the newest tries to prevent...]

bwicus(your thought was correct XD)

(i think im too naive to understand that pwp thanks tho?)

[the newest loophole tries to perform an axe–kick]

(you beat me on the language change part XD)brcus

(thats just painful pwp)

[the newest uses its high speed and attacks forward]

(you beat me on the language change part XD)brcus

(thats just painful pwp)

[the newest uses its high speed and attacks forward]

dahil(tagalog of because)

(WHY DOES HE NOT EXIST?!)

[the newest fails to escape the bomb....]

byocus

(my non existent crush)

[the newest loophole jumps to try and avoid]

bavcz

(cold–)

[the newest tries to reverse the spin of the tornade to try and surprise the oeiginal...]

bicys

(haha i getchuuuu)

[caught by surpised the newest stands there stunned!]

breciz

(oof im just way too gay to ignore em HAHAHAHAHA)

[The newest loophole finally traps the original then tries to spin and knock the original out]

breciz

(oof im just way too gay to ignore em HAHAHAHAHA)

[The newest loophole finally traps the original then tries to spin and knock the original out]

breciz

(oof im just way too gay to ignore em HAHAHAHAHA)

[The newest loophole finally traps the original then tries to spin and knock the original out]

bulcin

(XD thx– been busy readin tennis ace this time)

[the newest loophole then tries to make the tornado again with the new speed it got from repeating its own action!]

bukuj

(OMG I MISSED U TwT no phone for a month eyyyyy srry bout that)

[the newest loophole then tries to repeat]

blakos

(tbh i couldn't agree more XD any size of a d is good-)

[the newest loophole tries to spin around creating a tornado]

(casually reading the comments then waits for the next update to not shed a tear :))

bucas?-

(idk if "good" is to be used since my mom's phone also broke-)

[the newest loophole tries to be aware]

backoz

(owemjjim so sorry pwp my phone broke so uhh-)

[....the newest loophole tries to retret]

bralcen

(Oh well... Guess the concept of life is thanks to death as everything has an opposite such as nothing)

[The newest loophole than started to charge its speed!]

BELCUZ><<>><

(what is life without death?)

[The newest loophole tries to counter...!]

TOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM-

BLUCOS-

(sorry for not replying pwp my phone was borrowed if thats what youd call it)

[The newest loophole tries to run but since it can't move it wasnt able to! But gains a minimum amount of increase!]

pwp i think this isnt for all android since i kept downloading but the file just wont open to be installed pwp the pics be so cute dooeeeeeeee

BEACUZ.

(thx dude pwp)

[The newest loophole is significantly increased due to the repeated action!]

b e c a u s e s ?

(Sorry for not being able to reply pwp)

[The loophole tries to run! Again!]

B 3 C 4 U S 3 ? !

[the loophole tries to run!]

B E C A U S E

[the newest loopholethen dodges ignoring the original loophole's attack!]

bugoz?

[The newest loophole then attacks!]

(omg really? XDXDXD immagine the dev-)

b-becus?

[The loophole gains strength and speed from its repeated actions!]

bucoz.?!2<

[Theloophole tries to cover itself...]