The graphics can be improved greatly. There are a lot of grammatical errors which get worse as it goes-- which should also be improved. Formatting is slightly inconsistent in some places. It is also rather lengthy, a menu in the beginning or a description explaining the length of the game would be beneficial. The whole game should probably have been made into an actual Visual Novel instead of a sort of HTML hyperlink choice game. The representation is rather inappropriate with its use of stereotypes but the slow setting in of the mental condition is well put. Overall, much improvement can be made but the awareness is appreciated.
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