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Home Page

Is Easily tells you what the game is about and who the character in the game is.

The buttons could've been improved to make it more attractive and Interactable.

Sound feedback when clicked should've been used to.

The Background image, and the font size and color are easy to read.

Except the Title of the game "See No Evil" wasn't visible enough that if a user had a brighter screen, they would've missed it.

Help Page

Some images overlapped the text which made it hard to read.

But the information given was very informative about the game.

I was able to under the story behind the game and the controls of the game.

Having both the Play and Home Button on the page was great.

The Home button didn’t work but I understand why it was there. The mouse over some buttons was good.

Game Page

The total concept of the game was clear and the controls on the game was word fine and was good.

I would've preferred to having the Newspapers delayed a bit to allow the user to quickly react to choosing whether to jump of slide.

Not all user’s reaction time would be the same.

Although, if it was possible to use the arrow keys on the keyboard instead would've been great.

The Score Count wasn't visible enough to see whilst playing.

The Sound control should've been extended to see the whole bar when you’re adjusting the sound.

Proper alignment between the Home and Help Button.

The Jump and Slide text were too small for a person with bad eyesight.

The sound soundtrack and feedback sounds used is pretty good. Nice Job.

Results Page

The alignment of the home and Help button needs to be done.

The score needs should appear in the centre of the Screen with a bigger font and Color.

The Controls isn’t necessary to have on the results Screen.

And keeping the character in a losing state is good feedback of when you lose the game. So well done.

And the animation of the public with had signs is good as well.

Credits Page

The idea was there and laid out well. You could've put an appreciation message like "Thank you for playing" to the user and also decrease the speed in the auto scrolling, it was a little fast.

Overall, the game was easy to play.

I could Easily navigate to all pages without getting lost.

Well Done, Jack

Home Page

The Arrow clearly directed my eyes to the Start button that tells me that’s the button I should be clicking. I could easily navigate to another page.

The animation of the Penguin rolling in was very creative and the idea of replacing the letter "O" was brilliant. I also enjoyed the feedback sound I got when i clicked on a button.

Lastly, the Mouse over on all buttons was good except for the color combination you had for the credits button. The purple looked more of gradient color then a solid color.

Credits Page

The auto scroll on the credits page was a good idea but it was too fast to read all the writing. I would've preferred it to either be scrollable so I can manually scroll or decrease the speed on the auto scroll.

The Heading "Credits" should’ve been always shown whilst the auto scroll was happening. So, you could've masked the Credits shown to disappearing before it reached the Heading "Credits" and I would've preferred the ending message "Thank You for Playing" centred on the Game Screen with the blue text box color stretched out from top to bottom of the game screen.

Lastly, a Home or Back button should've been placed to return to the home page.

Exit Page

I like the little dialog message you had on the exit page and if it were possible, I would suggest having the snowman with a sad face because your about to exit the game.

The "YES" Navigation to the credits page was good but the "NO" navigation should've sent me to the Instructions page instead of automatically starting the game. And this applies to all Exit buttons throughout the while game.

And a Sad sound feedback can be put on the page to play on landing on the page.

Instructions Page

The page is very informative and Easy to read.

You should include a Home or Back button to return to the home page.

Otherwise, I enjoyed the read.

Game page

I like the help button, pause button, and home button but the Sound control button should've been expended a bit to show the whole sound bar and the Jump button should've been more interactive when clicked like shrunk in size.

The sound feedback when the stars are collected was good with the coin animation floating to the top that adds up the total collected.

The Message pop-ups when penguins were missed was great.

The Score tally was good as well.

And the soundtrack was enjoyable to listen to.

Results Page

The sound feedback used when you lose was great. And the continuing of the soundtrack was great.

I would've preferred to only have the animation of the Snowman itself then show the Game Over Message to be shown above the Score Tally.

And the Play Again should be made to catch the eye direction of the users.

But Overall, Great job on the game Tracey.

I enjoyed playing the game with the sounds.

Saujanya,

I liked the effort on the spaceship and the title but it I think having it out at the top tell the user the game is called Planet Beta and not the Spaceship.

I like the hover of change in colour of the buttons but you it lack the consistency of spacing between each button.

Also, a resolution change would've been good as well because not all users use the same type of screen size. A few of the Icons like the Move and Close button werent visible on my screen even in fullscreen mode.

Tracey,

Well done.

Everything from the sound used to the layouts of content.

I like how you hade less items on the main screen so it looks like its not all squeezed up together. The sound used very well goes with the theme of the game. The button layout in the control of your Alien is nice. 

And changes I would suggest is the colour of the some buttons is too transparent that the white in the background hits the white text so its not real visible also with your title, it could've used a different font or stretched out a bit

But otherwise. 

Great Job!!!...