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I really enjoy how to create a mysterious atmosphere by adding effects to the text and pictures. The ending is open-ended, which makes it even creepier! If I could only open the chest after getting the key, that would be even better, so that I am forced to walk through the whole castle! 

I really enjoy how to use different colours and spacing to create the "AI" looking vibe. The narrative is so engaging that is so relatable, and I like the sense of humour.  Look forward to see more!

The story is so engaging! I really appreciate the effort you put into building up the world in the story that makes me feel like I am actually inside the house. The details that you put in are really good, too, such as the blurry text, and the option would turn to purple after I pressed on it. 

The way you describe the scene is so interesting and brings me into the world. There are so many elements that create the atmosphere, like the dog, the screaming, and even the gun shot. However, some code might not be wrapped in a bracket so I can see the variables. I'm looking forward to seeing more endings!

I lost a few times at first, which I appreciate because it adds depth to the game. As the game goes on, the tension keeps building up. The script is so well written. It might be helpful to us to read better if the first letter in the sentence can be capitalized. Adding mysterious music might be cool too!