Hello, I greatly enjoyed your game and would highly enjoy a second game.
May I suggest adding a choosable dialog, so there are more choices such as when you have to get the hair you can just ask and they willingly give it rather than just take it. Also, I love the art style and I would keep it like that but I would put in more characters (some you can interact with some you can't). it would also be neat if some of them could come over to your side and go with you. Or maybe some could just give you hints on where to get some of the items. By the way, I absolutely adored the soundtrack and I think this could go a long way if you keep at the game.
Please keep up the amazing work with your game -Sincerely Jacob