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Thanks for your input! I definitely agree that I could've done a better job at setup or foreshadowing for the end of the story, because it does seem like it kind of came out of nowhere. This was my first time writing for something like this, so I'm glad there were parts of it that you did enjoy. I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. Thank you for playing my game! :)

Thanks for the feedback! I definitely agree with you on some of the smoothing issues, I could've definitely done a better job setting up events and making them feel more realistic. I'm glad you enjoyed the game regardless of some of the issues though! Especially the bathroom scene, it was probably my favorite to write. I'll keep your comments in mind if i do end up making another game :)

Thank you for your very kind words! I was planning on having a choice very similar to the one you described, but I scrapped it for time so I could focus on having one full project. I also really appreciate your advice, and I'll make sure to keep it in mind if I do end up making another game! :)

Thank you for your extremely kind words! Your feedback is really appreciated. This was my first time making any kind of project like this,  and I think you can tell in some places. I really didn't expect anyone to dig into the code, HAHAHAH, I couldn't figure out how to make layers work.

In terms of the story, I had a lot of ideas (especially surrounding the choices) that just had to get scrapped based on time and ability. I wish I could've made those choices a little more consequential as well.

But I'm really happy that you enjoyed the game! If I do end up making another visual novel in the future, I'll keep your words in mind! :)

Thank you for the kind words! I did originally plan to have an alternate CG with Emily, and a sprite if I had time, but I had to cut it because of time constraints.

Thank you!!! I was worried that the content warnings made the game look more serious than it was, but I wanted to put them there just in case. I'm glad you liked the game! :)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the game. The painting was the most enjoyable part for making the background for me lmao