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Hi everyone! I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at Pride and Cruelty, a queer remake of an animation back in 2015, critique the art or writing! It is incomplete for sure, but anything helps :)
did the characters look interesting or visually appealing? Did the story hook you in, or were there parts that felt like they were dragging on? Did the characters feel real? Was there any things you'd change?
Thank you! Heres some BTS of art.



this was lovely to read. your lineart with no colour gives a sense of intimacy, which goes well with the theme of the story. I'd recommend exploring the theme further through the art, showing more of the isolation. aka, making the audience FEEL it even without reading the text.
I used to joke that I dont go to SWANA community gatherings because of homophobia and transphobia, and don't go to queer events because of racism. The subject is a tough one, and as you can see so many of us relate!!
Amazing work, hope to see more.
this was lovely to read. your lineart with no colour gives a sense of intimacy, which goes well with the theme of the story. I'd recommend exploring the theme further through the art, showing more of the isolation. aka, making the audience FEEL it even without reading the text.
I used to joke that I dont go to SWANA community gatherings because of homophobia and transphobia, and don't go to queer events because of racism. The subject is a tough one, and as you can see so many of us relate!!
Amazing work, hope to see more.






