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I love this set up. I think the premise of the game is extremely interesting and fresh. I would have never been able to come up with an idea like this so I am quite amazed. 
The story unfolding in a diary is a smart choice that lends itself to the medium well. I know this is "incomplete" but I had a great time playing this. 

The stylistic decisions taken in this game are amazing. It feels so polished and professional. Love the visuals and the atmosphere you have created in the game. It almost feels like scrolling through a story book. The story is gripping and I felt the end was quite satisfying. Thoroughly enjoyed the game and still in awe of the production level. Amazing. 

The artwork is lovely. I wish all the text would come all the same time but thats a minor nitpick. I love the character design and I really enjoyed the duration of the game.

The attention to detail is amazing. The visual,dialogue and music all fit really well and make the story so immersive. I love the interactions with the NPCs and once the objective of the game becomes clear it becomes easier to play the game. The sleeping everyday can be a bit clearer and I feel the objective should be made slightly more clear in the start. Other than that this is really well done and I am shocked at how much effor has gone in it. 

The story is so well written. It was moving and emotional. The bg score fit the game so well that I didnt think anything was missing. I love the writing and how you have adapted such an emotional story to a game.  It made me feel things. Excellent job.

I enjoyed the suspense of this game. I like that there is just enough world building for the game to make sense. It helps me keep track of the story and of my decisions as well. THe game's payoff feels very satisfactory and gives a perfect closure to a dramatic game like this. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Great job. 

Love the background score so much. It lends itself to the story so well. I really like this story as well. Its a nice feel good story and makes me feel warm and dreamy. I love the illustrations and almost wish there were more of it. They add a lot of depth and emotion to the story. Amazing job :))

The world building from landing to this page to the game is amazing. The GIFs,music and narration all lend to the atmosphere and feel like puzzle pieces fitting together.

I loved the simplicity of the game and the speed of it too. It didnt feel rushed and didnt compromise on storytelling also. All of this while being concise and evoking multiple replays. 
I got Dead Ends A,B and C. 

Overall, great job I loved how all of this came together. 

this was a fun play. I love the tone of the game and how wuirky it is. Even being this light toned it was paced quite well and made me excited about taking the decisions and progressing in the game. My character turned the queen into vampire and the queen goes onto rule with an iron fist. 

Great job.

I really like the game. The mystery and noir tone of the game is really on point. 
I got the ending where I chased after the squirrel and it said " to be continued" which leaves me excited to try out what happenss next. 

The game was eerie and scary. It was very unusual and I really enjoyed it. 
I wish there was a bit more in the details of the horro elements to it. But overall nice pacing and really fun to play and finish. I turned to a mermaid in the end which was an unexpected fun ending. 
Overall. Great job.

I love the fantastical elements to the story. I am Ravencaller and I got the ending where I kill the warden and turn to Varrash. 

Overall I love the game and the world building. The pacing is very nice and quick. The story moves quite well. There were a couple moments that were really fun which made me go back and play it again which was 1.) the left and right turn in the cave. 2) The riddle about faith. Great job. This was a really fun game. 

I love the tone of the game and how gentle and soothing it feels. Can imagine playing this game with some cherry blossom visual and lofi music.
I like the interactions between me and shuteye. I got the ending where we go back to mango's place and are looking to discover what's next. 
Overall I really like the emotion it evoked in me. However I hope the text was broken down into smaller more readable parts. 

This game is super cute. The dog reveal was lovely and just elevated the game. 
I went onto doing silly things in the game which was fun. 
I did struggle a bit with all the back and forth in the options as the there were no text changes and it became repetitive after a while. 

I was killed in one ending and managed to escape in other but left Argus behind. 
I really like this game. The pacing is quite good and it moves fast too. The tone is satirical and leaves you guessing with what will happen. I like the shifts in tone to silly and suspense also.