Art: 10/10 - I love the pixel arts! Not sure if you got them from somewhere so here's your 10.
Music: 7/10 - Okay, I checked and you got this music which was not made by you, but you found one that fits the style.
Gameplay: 9/10 - I kinda expected some enemies and bosses to fight with, but an interactive story seems good too. It's just... short...? I don't really like to see looped buildings, but you put something each time there was a building which makes them more unique (not a lot)
Overall: 8.7/10 - Nice!
Note: Remember people, developing a game can indeed take a long time. Also the creator of this interactive story has admited that it's short and unpolished and expects there be bugs. Plus the person has schoolwork.