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Okay, so I read through all the posts you linked once I finally got some free time today! If my mind took in everything correctly, then I'm very excited to see pairs that might seem like they're already being built up potentially break apart once they realise they're actually really incompatible will be great (I live for the drama when the mood strikes). Ngl, I'm probably never gonna be fully  objective here, as I've had waaayy too many experiences of IFs or VNs setting up relationships between ROs waaaay too early and/or quickly to the point it felt genuinely icky to try and romance the characters included in those scenarios 😬 and I mostly don't really buy into any "opposties attract" types of tropes (I can't seem to pick a struggle, I know, it's a full on curse)

However I fully understand that there are just things one can't fully judge with an unfinished story and with only about half the cast being barely introduced lmao. 

But I'm def gonna stay tuned for any future updates as patiently as my silly brain can manage lol! And if it's not annoying, I either might add onto the feedback or mayhaps sign up for that beta testing... although idk how useful I would truly be as a beta tester, as someone who goes for the masc presenting characters only 😭 but we shall see!

Very intrigued by the dating reality TV show setting and honestly excited to see where the whole story goes, but I do have a bit of feedback/some thoughts on the demo so far that I hope could be answered? A lil bit?

-I did read in another comment that there are predeterminted pairs planned for the full game, for all the characters not picked by MC, but... It all sort of feels already too rushed in what is esentially supposed to be the prologue/chapter 1. It's totally possible I might be understanding the characters all wrong lol, but if not, then the first pairs just also feel quite strange???  To break it down more (and so sorry for the long ahh text in advance):

-Now this point will only work if the only options at the start will be Dmitry and Kalea even once the full game is released BUUUT I don't see how Makai and Kailee, and then Dmitry and Anjali pick one another so quickly ...? From what I'm gathering, Makai is supposed to be this very closed off guy, who's cautious of everyone and doesn't seem to enjoy socialising all that much (at least with total strangers) so I don't quite get why he's so okay with someone like Kailee immediately attaching herself onto him, ESPECIALLY with her put on behaviour of being besties within seconds, while simultaneously acting weirdly possessive over the guy whenever he's interacting wit MC in literally any sort of way?

-And it's kind of the same deal in my head with Dmitry and Anjali. I get that Dmitry is sort of supposed to be the very kind hearted golden retriever type, but then it's confusing (at least to my super overthinking brain) for him to go for Anjali, of all people, when she's just endlessly rude, condescending or obviously turning her nose up at everyone and only going for Dmitry cause she seems to find him physically attractive. Does he just try and force to see good in people even if he hasn't seen any evidence of it being there? I mean, I honestly don't know if he IS supposed to come off as naive like that or not, but that's what it feels like ngl :')

This all just my own interpretation and reading into things ofc, but I thought I might share this in case it'd be helpful to hear how someone else reads your character's personalities! Hopefully this doesn't come off as like, rude or something cause that's genuinely not the intention here 😭 (english is not my first language and sometimes the intended tone does NOT come through well whatsoever)

Idk how hard this could be to implement, but if possible, it could be nice for the first coupling ceremony to be completely randomised! I feel like that could potentially give it a much more natural feel considering the setting, and the fact that none of the characters know one another at that point

Yeahh I may or may not have read the entire Unraveled fanfic so that quote has its purpose ;D

since I don't have tumblr but still wanna join the Wanderer contest,,,,, 👉👈 I shall give you my Wanderer's design and throw in some random, extra images that describe his personality the best 

Oh, also. My dear Wanderer willingly took a selfie with a certain weirdo extraodrinaire so. do with that what you will.

simple mullet 🙏 

I really really realy love this, but I found that during the section where Masky and Hoodie find the player, it used the incorrect pronouns multiple times (she instead of he)

Genuinely can't wait for more of this game <3

edit: also wanted to add that the dialogue can be pretty confusing, it can be hard to tell in what order to read the text popping up