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Look...I haven't even finished the prologue yet. But I've already fallen in love. I love the writing style, first of all. It's not as suffocating and descriptive. Also, the bluntess of @Anything4thecrown is just hilarious. I mean, there's a goddamn page that asks if you have a cock or a cunt. WTF?!

I...am Noodles Northbreaker.

Why? Why is Noodles a suggestion? Why is it not automatically the MC's name?!

All jokes aside, it's been quite a while since I've found a gem like this and, so far, it's been pretty damn enjoyable. It's an interesting concept, not just being abandoned by the gods but cursed. Now, I haven't really gotten all that far in, but there's very little to critique. The storyline so far is beautiful and the choices aren't too stressful...yet. Very few grammar errors too. I shall add further compliments as I go. COMPLIMENTS. But, @Lunan, you are doing a beautiful and amazing job. Keep it up and don't feel too rushed to get out an update if you don't feel it's not up to your standards!

Edit 1: First of all, TURN BACK IF YOU HAVEN'T PLAYED THE GAME YET! THERE'S A BIG-ASS BUTTON THAT SAYS PLAY GAME. GO CLICK IT! Ahem. Moving on. I just hit chapter 3 (I'm slow with this kind of stuff). JESUS CHRIST. I'm loving the little choices you get to make in regards to interactions with children or your disposition to certain people, etc., etc. You really don't see this as much as you'd think (at least not in my itch.io experience). Also, giving warning on the "steamy moments" is a good call. That was...surprisingly descriptive. Not unpleasantly, just...really bold. If I'm going to give critique on anything, it'll be purely on grammatical issues (that are pretty minor anyway). @Lunan, you could also make the titles to the chapters the transitions themselves rather than adding transitioning additional text, but that's neither here nor there. ADIEU

Wow...just...wow.  I never thought that just the prologue of a game would be so entertaining. The world-building has been great, you set out a clear (albeit unorthodox) objective, and fairly extensive customization options. I'm excited to see how this will go so please, despite what anyone might say, don't feel pressured to get out a new update when you still have concerns.

Never. Never for the life of me did I ever think I would be playing through a fantasy game about music. And never did I think I would love it so much. I am most definitely not the first or last to say so, but please keep doing what you do best!

That...makes so much more sense. Really looking forward to that! And, I cannot stress this enough, this "tale" you've created is absolutely AMAZING!

I find it incredibly hard to believe that I didn't leave a comment on this yet. Simply put, a F***KING MASTERPIECE.

First of all, the range of options you have and how it affects you later on is amazing. Different characters will have different reactions to different choices and the romance is just absolutely beautiful. I'm on my 4th playthrough and the cheat sheet was a great idea. Makes my choices much more simpler. 

I do have one tiny little suggestion that, even if applied, I think I'll forget that I made. When you first hear of the previous Crown, he's called the Ferzan the Bold. I think it would be kind of cool to have different titles according to the player's stats in the end. Like, wayyyyyyyy in the end. Epilogue basically.

Take it or leave it, either way, this is probably my favorite thing on the entirety of this site.  You get a thumbs up from me! (because I have no idea how to apply emojis on this thing)

This is the 2nd time I'm reading through this story and I'm ashamed to admit that I didn't fully read out the writing. But, that's when I stumbled on this piece of gold!

"In a rare moment of defiance, poorly chosen, Arthur stands up for himself: "I wanted to meet my child, Morgana!""

...poor dude.

I don't care how long it takes. But please persist! Everyone here loves "A Tale of Crowns" and I'd rather not have to go through the mourning of another abandoned WIP. We believe in you!