Hello! Your writing is legitimately really compelling and I love the story so far! There is one thing I would like to point out and it's that I seem to be misgendered a few times? I'm playing a man with he/him pronouns and there was one time Elias referred to me as his girlfriend during dinner and the doctor referring to me as Mrs. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to the rewrite!
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