Hi RJ,
Compliments on the game. Well written and well handled.
I have found a couple of glitches. You may have already sorted them out but I'll log them here anyway just in case.
First up, depends on just plain dumb luck timing.
If you spend the night with Mari on exactly the same night that the Kendra waterskiing sequence is triggered on the following morning, you will go to sleep in Mari's bed at her place and be woken up in your own bed by Kendra's call. I don't think sleep teleportation is a normal part of the plot. ;) And I can't help picturing Mari going "Where the hell did he go?" the next morning. Plus, your car apparently teleports back with you as well.
Second is that if you decide to not play through Adrian's path after the announcement sequence but still occasionally game with the character you will get the phone call for the movie date discussing a previous sexual encounter your character was never on.
Have fun with those.