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Oh you can finally see the end on the horizon, damn i really hope you aint regretting making this game after five years. Like 5 years, the world managed to change after five years, i’ve finished college and join army after these five years while there’s no end of any route. Story sometimes changed so it was at least few mounths in drain. Maybe it takes so long because there’s too much text. Like over 17.5k words on this update, wow, are you really need that much? Like we cant deal with ~10k or something? I dont want to say that someone bad, or he doing his job bad, i just cant understand why it takes so long to make a visual novel (Like, its not AAA game or some survival from greenlight).

You got to be very strong to have will to finish this, got to be very determined to see the end on the horizon. Cause i cant see it

Oh yeah and one more thing. When you’ll come to “The end” of story, will you finish it right? Like could you even make it, what if you aint gonna have any ideas on it, or what if fans will not expect story to end that way, or it just not gonna worth the whole game behind.

Thats some serious thoughts no matter how much dislikes i’ll get or if you even delete this comment. I just dont know how soft people become after five years

I can smell some cooking

Sorry man, my game is dead, there’ll be no porn.

I know its a hell of a question but i need to ask him… Can i fuck Sander? Seriously, how to

I wanna ask a question, well, before that i say that my “W” is fucking dead, so i use “3” insted, and with walking and everything its allright, but when im trying to swim my guy just drown. So, did you forget to bind swimming up to actual button instead of using constant “W”?

Oh i see you, i see you, for me its kinda sad not using all potential of engine and such stuff but looks like you already got everything planned, thats cool.

Ohh wait, 14 routes? Man, you crazy, i dont know how you gonna insert whole game lore into these, good luck with that.

So, Korrin is like protagonist of Apocalipse Now, the watcher not actor i guess (I just wanted to make a reference)

I aint got much to say after your reply actually, got whole picture from now on and wish you success with developing this game. Peace.

And if you wanted to make it on RPG Maker so we can walk and explore locations then why this game has only few of them and they like… corridors from A to B and bedrooms?

Also if some characters has super powers then why dont we have any? They easily could be like skills in battles if you decide to add them.

You know what, i aint got any suggestions, just do what you do, stay cool, and i like this game anyway.

I guess

Actually i just wanted to ask: Is this game a visual novel about dating guys or it will be some rpg where you can be good or bad as these furries game told us in introduction? Like, lore of this game has good guys and bad guys. And from now on Korrin nor good nor bad, he just is. And i saw 1 HP in menu which told me this game aint got fights… and it actually dont. Are you gonna add them? Then another question: if this game aint need battle system then why you make it on RPG Maker and not Ren Py instead?

I know that everyone wants to just romance cute boys but not me, i want to name my character Kane, both sold or kill all of my so-called frinds and became EVIL. Maybe i want too much but i actually think this game got more potential then any other “Gay VN about dating boys”.

Am i just made April O’Neil?

Yeah i see it, that new pfp give me a heart attack, I thought this game contains bdsm from now on, whoooh.

С кайфом. Ладно шучу, ищи в инете

Well well well, 4th day for Lake, Mikko and Devon, characters i actually care, much. I guess debts have started to fix themselves or idk how we students say it. Now i can take my words back about Klaus and maybe some else bad stuff i said month ago.

I can even close my eyes on the fact that you needed 5 years to make this. We are so close to the end i can almost feel it, a year or two and this game finally done.

Better than Concord, 10/10

“route we haven’t touched for a while…” from November 30 2021. Thank god you not forgot about Klaus, so now i can take back my words about his route. Good job, keep it up

The hate you show to me is disgusting. Get some therapy, you sad sack)

Toru who?)

Call me a hater if you want im just saying thing no one else can say. Of course i crossed the line because i wasnt writing feedback. I aint said good things about this vn because there’s already 1300 comments saying that, so i thought there’s no point for saying good thing and then saying bad (because everybody knows good things about this game).

Yeah, Travis may not be gay (Cause no one cares about him), but everyone else is gay, so yeah, this is GAY novel. About Mikko and Arvo, if i remember correctly Arvo said that this these 5 days in science camp maybe his only chance to open up truth to Mikko… so yeah, im waiting for Arvo to say “I loved you too” (or “I still love you” (doenst mind for now cause he aint said that anyway :P),BECAUSE, if Arvo aint gonna say that to Mikko… then we all be waiting Dawn Chorus 2? (Another five years)

Now i must tell you why im so bad to Lake, its my personal actually… just, well, i’ve been playing this game from 2022 to 2024 and i really waited for any Lake updates because i loved this guy. I was glad when i saw new sprites… but then, well Lake that i’ve been knowing for two years as him, my beloved fella who cant cook became “them”, its was like Lake that i know gone, there no more my boy, maybe not like alien, but they just stole him from me. For your understanding i wasnt grow in lgbtq culture, so i just cant understand non-binary people, i can with mind, but cant with my soul. So if my word about Lake make you feel bad im sorry, i really am. But again, it was my opinion, it was what i felt.

And one more thing, DutchFurryteen, you said that i should get out because i cant handle that Arvo cant say 4 words, but he really must say them, or there will be no Mikko and Arvo together. You said that i dont deserve Lake and you really right. You call me a dick and said me to shut up. But im not gonna say anything bad to you, im here not to do that.

Damn its almost been five years and you still aint done this vn, i know that its creative process and everything, but since 2022 when i found this game i nearly forgot about it. And oh man, no way im gonna call Lake “them”, im straight gay i see only “him”, but thats not the point. I hope you guys know what you’re doing, cause not just me but everyone here wants to see the end of this vn someday.

Oh yeah and another thing, i think you forgot someone, like Claus and Travis, i can understand Travis but Claus was on this game page since 2022 as i remember along with everyone, but still has a few dialoges in the game (again as i can remember) and still no route at all.

Iam just a stupid fan, but even i managed to make my fully own vn (dont check it, its trash) and you still aint got day 5 for… anyone… back on the track, im not knowing everything that you’ve been through, but even i see thats something just not right with this. Maybe that passive piece of tigah bottom named Arvo has skill issue and cant say just 4 words “I loved you too” or whatever.

Im not hater or anything, im a big fan of this game and i want it to be good too, but im not blind, not lying in Lake’s mane too much, and not accepting Mikko’s invitation means die is hilarious

NO WAY dude, you’re not dead? Thats cool

If there weren’t automatic mode, I’d become ambidextrous thats fo sure

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Короче. Круто. Мешанину из имён я не осилил только. Ну реально, Сэм? Бен? ещё там кто-то, я забыл. Ну и иногда новелла слишком резкая. Ну в плане от момента знакомства класса с Джо и до момента того как он общается со всеми кроме нас переход без доп. текста, просто на нахуй.

Извини, что доебался, новелла то крутая. Моя бойцовская личность, которая пиздилась со всеми в школе на моменте где Патрик рассказывает как его буллят такая: ОТЛИЧНО, будет кому дать пизды, *Тут я начинаю бить воздух под рэп на кухне*, жду не дождусь когда Патрик запишется на бокс и даст всем пизды. Седьмой сезон бойца Баки. 

Ну да ладно. Продолжай в том же духе. У тебя отлично получается

Не думаешь, что это слишком подозрительно писать по мазер рашия на англоязычном сайте?

So that means im doing good job after all. Glad you like it

Thanks for reading this novel

At first you don't understand, but then you're chiki briki v damki

Pls dont check old Kevin sprites in the game folder, its cringe as hell

Temmie, thanks, you reminded me that I forgot to add a REASON why Terry is even around our guys. This is my fuck-up, i hate these head-canons, sorry

I agree with you, there are so many serious novels on itch io. Who can make some funny moments, but the story comes first. And here's I, yeen who added choice... not to choose anybody just to laugh, really. Anyway, im glad you like my novel. And yeah, who needs humans anyway

The fact is that I left the background of the characters, and all this for the next update. Initially, I needed to make at least the first build. I thought it would be further along the course of the routes to reveal the characters, but I think I have to rewrite the text and reveal the characters even before the route window. Anyway, thank you, i'll try to make it better

Thanks man

I'm glad you liked it

These are exactly the words that clear my head, thanks

Thank you

Man since you are my first commentator I wanna say thank you. Just, thank you. When you hear words of support, you realize that at least you didn't try in vain

Didnt know i've been needed Redline bf in my life, but here i am

Mother Russia Bleeds with furries. At least you dont have to make a revolution, you have to survive. Well, its platformer and beat 'em up in one game. Thats cool, i expect more combat moves later. At least there can be dash & punch, or hard attack when you hold Z. Oye i forgot to say, artstyle is beatiful, i cum even without nsfw scenes. Gameplay is great, the story of Chiro is just like my real life. And another thing, what about to make some shops of consumables, clothes and bla bla, and money you get from beating enemies. At least now there will be a desire to beat every one of them.

P.S: im didnt want to say you what to do, but enemies that pop out of existence when you beat them its, well you guess it. And... damn what if Chiro beats enemies and she can has dominant sex with them?

So, what do we got now...

Beru, Softfull doughboy;

Oven... okay okay, Owen. Lil monke... fine, otter;

Lucy. The only one character, who pumped intelligence;

Kim. My type, inspire, athletic and cheerful guy, love him (just like... everyone here?)

And Terry. Not badmouth him, he's good. Guy is just playing "The Forest", "STRANDED Deep" irl, he just forgot to set privacy on "private', not even "friends only" (he doesnt have friends).

Btw, abot Stranded Deep, no, im not gonna say that Stranded Deep and Stranded quite similar on the title ('cause i already done that). I just imagine Terry flying on palm tree for helicopter and saying: "Im not gonna stay with those idiots"

Well, yeah, but its dont save situation

ABS dont exist,  ABS dont exist, there is only Amicus belly